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| wondereye 2008-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think you started a great story if you want to keep going. |
| Grey Pigeon 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseHmm. Beautiful dreams he has! First of all... why so short? I'm always asking that question^^, but this time it's really shorter than I expected. Pity, because after a promise "When the time comes, you will know" you could end a story with a meeting - Eomer and that strange woman from his dream. And I would rather put "naked" in place of "bare", but I may be wrong... What I liked was: the title (you see, it's intriguing) and the phrase "milk-white flesh". And the idea itself. Nice piece of work. All best to you, Grey Pigeon |