Lovely story, I really enjoyed it.

Wonderful! :)

so detailed and sweet. i can feel the emotion

Very well written! I've always wondered what happened in that scene.

You wrote this awhile ago, but I just found it and I am so glad I did! I have always wanted to know...well, what happened THEN? Why is it cut off right at the good part? You did justice to the manga's original characters and emotions: it was gorgeous.

Excellent work!

That was very sweet and filled with so much emotion. Thank you for not making the sex smutty or harlequin. It was beautiful.

great story. Just one question:

What does "aisheteru" mean? I know all the other Japanese in the story except for that bit could you please tell me.

This was a very well written story! It captures the personalities of the characters so well! I have not read the manga, but after reading this story I think I will find an online version.

I also liked how the sexual action between them was slow. It took time for them to come together, building up to something so beautiful. I liked that it wasn't fast an crude.

this story really did make me shed a tear or two!

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Nicely written. I loved it _. Good work!

wow hahah intense... loved it!

Aww! How cute! I'm not going to give you all the credit, though, as it was derived from the manga, but what an interesting twist! I loved it.

wow soo intense i still like the story wot it was good

Beautiful.

This was one.. if not THE most beautiful Fanfics i ever read (and I read alot so far). This scene was so very lovely in the manga and the way you extended it is simply gorgeous. It's true that the scene can be interpreted differently but I pretty much was thinking the same as I read the manga.

Congratulations and Thank you for writing such a breathtaking and lovely story.

i aways thought something happened between that scene and the next when they wake up in the morning and Usagi is wearing his shirt over her dress

hehehe

nice work!