Oh, gosh, how funny. "Are you just going to stand there and say 'what' all day?" And the first word out of Gunther after this is: "What?" I am cracking up! : )

This sounds like something Jane and Gunther would do... I mean all the bickering and then the awkward making-up thing. I don't think the kissing thing would come into play, but then, I am a Jane/Jester shipper, if I ship anything. So you probably shouldn't listen to me in regards to that aspect. : )

Where did the random "Verbena" come from? I get that that is Pepper's real name, but why did Gunther say it just then?

I like how Pepper turned and ran off. : )

so what happens whith jester?

so... sweet... cavities... killing me...

*dies*

-stripedpolkadots (thinks pepper had the correct reaction... communal SQUEAL)

omg! so cool! i've searched jane/gunther for a long time on fanfiction and look what i found, a very cute story^^

to cute

That was really good. =]
Its the first jane and the dragon fanfiction i've read and I lurve it! Every time i've watched jane and the dragon i've thought that could totally happen! I mean the opportunity is there. PLUS I sorta wanted it to happen
XP

people are staring at me because im laughing like a maniac.

i hope youre happy.

...
hmm...
i think gunther should tell jane how cute she looks when she's mad.

yupyup, tat might get him another kiss...

-jolie

the beggining was cute.. the ending was hilarious! ahaha poor rake! lol :) nice work ♥

Very cute! Loved it!
Go JatD!

That was adorable! You eased into the second kiss wonderfully! well done!

that was adorable :D!! I LUVED IT hehe i feel like Pepper right now *squel*

HAHAHAHA that was lovely! I love the dialogue b/t the two--it was spot-on and completely in-character, and it flowed seamlessly. And the awkward moments were PERFECT! Especially the ending...LOL XD I love it, and I can completely imagine this happening. Great job! :)

Luv,
Miss Pookamonga ;-P

Ha, I like it! "First you say you hate each other, and now you're swapping smoke!" I saw my sister do that once; it was really cute.

Keep this one going. I like it.
And keep Dragon's humor in there, too. ^^

cute! WRITE MORE! lol

lmao! Oh, wow. That was absolutely hilarious. Pepper makes my *life*, I swear it.
Very cute. Good dialogue- they kind of repeated themselfs a little, which got a teensy bit boring, but overal it was *very* well done.

lmao. I'm still chuckling here.