This is pretty good. I like the idea of adding a character to the orginal one's. Please keep going!

it sounds great i can't wait to read it. I really like ALL of your books they are exiting and brings me on a adventure every time. KEEP WRITING!

Hahaha, Melissa keeps telling JJ he got burned when she gets burned by Will...weird twist of fate, huh, Melissa? XD

I've always LOVED Island! PLEASE continue! Pwease?

i really like this story. i was hoping for another story based on the island books, and i found a good one. i mean, it quotes directly from the books, but who cares? melissa slides right into the story!

I love your book!

I loved it! It's so good! Keep posting!

how do you post stories on here bsc9? I have a few stories that I want to put on here.

hey! I like your story.

As long as you keep posting, I'll keep reveiwing. I like reviewing. Keep it up! I like having a good story other than Harry Potter to read.

Yay! You're a fast updater!

Howdy. I really enjoyed these books, and I think your fic is doing them justice, so far. Can't wait for you to update so I can see what you'll do with this.