love this fic! i love the plot, its so original. please continue to write.

great story keep up the good work update soon

This storyis fantastic, you have to continue! Can't wait fopr the nxt chapter!

This is an excellent story and i think you shoul continue Hr/Padma, it would make more sense that way

WOOT I LOVE IT KEP IT UP I AWNT MORE!

LOVE IT!

ah thats crazy and hot!

i love i so far.

Well, that was a heck of a prank, but Minerva sure was willing to suffer for it it seems, and looking forward to the next part. Glad to see Poppy involved, even if she was feeling a bit huffy at Minnie, LOL. Ron's as thick as a block of lead it seems.

Wow I had a dream very similar to this one the other day...



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This makes a very interesting spy network. Wish there'd been something like this support network to pry Severus Snape out of the Headmaster's grasp. Dumbledore mucks with so many peoples lives that even when they give supposed "informed consent" to what's going on, you know Dumbledore has to be hiding and manipulating facts. I've long suspected that Dumbledore used the torture by the Marauders in order to make Severus his tool, and Lily as Head Girl had to be coven, but I wonder just how much manipulation of her mind went into her refusing to ever be Severus's friend again after the incident at the end of Fifth Year. More, more, more, please. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

This is very confusing. Does the Coven allow girls who are not gay/bi to become prefects or not? Hermione's question wasn't really answered, all that was said was that she was otherwise qualified. It said nothing about if she would have been prefect if she were not gay. And if they do allow straight girls to become prefects, do they memory charm them as they do the boys if they find a gay couple in the closets?

And the usage of these memory charms does not bother Hermione at all? Mind-raping innocent male prefects because they see something the Coven wants kept secret? The Coven apparently keeping huge stores of information and books in a secret library...thus giving a members-only advantage over other girls? Having spies, people in positions of power, etc. throughout the government, making sure things they want secret are kept secret? Sounds like this 'Coven' is no better than those it claims to fight against.

It seems like two sides of the same coin. The male establishment on one side, the Coven on the other. Both using disgusting methods for what they judge to be 'the greater good'.

I'd love to see Hermione have to memory charm Harry, or at the very least one of the other prefects have to do it. How would she feel when she knows the innocent person being memory charmed for being in the wrong place at the wrong time? What if he finds out about the Coven, and though he doesn't mind the orientation, he hates the methods? What if Hermione or the other prefects are given the task to wipe his mind of all knowledge of the Coven? Could she go through with this betrayal of his trust?

Great! I have to say that the Hermione/Padma pairing never occured to me but I do like it alot! Thanks!

Meh.
Sure the juvenile, and very male, fantasy was ok -- but there was almost no plot.

As a story it needs work. As smut, it might do.

Amusing, but ultimately a failure. Story has no "legs" beyond one long, drawn-out running joke.

The only saving grace is its clear "parody" and/or "farce" nature. Were it a serious attempt at a story, this would fall firmly into the "Let's Make Everyone Homosexual" fic trap often stumbled into by newbie authors.