aw what beautful story..everyone who needed to get their ** whooped got it and everyone who deserved to be together were...im off to read the sequel..i hope you update it and metamorphosis soon ..until next time...tootles (huge smile)

omg omg that was awesome amazing cool
i just loved it u are amazing writer and
if nobody redas your stories just count on me to read them

please update for me if i'm the only 1
reading the story more for me lolz
i love the story

let's see...

A - current time flow of events.
B - ?
C - Feudal Era.

in other words, i am dying to find out what is going to push them into the feudal era! also, nice foreshadowing at the end of 23... "don't close your heart now."

ah, sorry for the short reviews... and i pardon, but this too will have to be short! you have improved a great deal since the beginning of this story, it's far more interesting now and it flows naturally and smoothly. excellent job on the past two chapters, and i think you captured the attitude of the guys just as i imagined. can't wait to see what happens between miroku and sango when sango tells miroku about what she did with shippo. not to mention, how bad is he going to get pounded by miroku? can't wait to find out!

ah, i'm looking forward so much to how the guy's day out goes! especially with inuyasha's attitude and sesshomaru's disdain for anything relatively social or emotional! great job at the past chapters, you're improving all the time!

excellent series of chapters! never have i seen an author improve a story so much just from one review, i am honored and thoroughly shocked that you actually took what i said into consideration! truly an FFN first i've seen!

positives are plentiful and far outweigh the negatives. the end of this chapter was excellent, and you did a great job at focusing on all the characters and then tying inuyasha, sesshomaru, and miroku together. i can only imagine what is going to happen next, because this story is getting more and more interesting.

your descriptions in chapter 10, 12, and 14 of the mansion were fantastic, i could picture it perfectly in my head. sure, it wasn't necessary to understand the layout of it perfectly, but you did an outstanding job at describing it and laying it out. the way rin described the room was perfect. not overly descriptive that made me bog my head on what was where, and not under descriptive that left too much too the imagination. very good middle ground you were able to find, as i should say so passively. =P

bringing naraku and kagura together as siblings was pretty interesting, because it gave the story some action and it involved naraku in the plot, the main antagonist of the inuyasha series. though i'm sure he will be bothering the group again, i bet he'll be a little more careful after the ** kicking he received from sesshomaru.

i think kagome is taking what happened with inuyasha and his masters really hard. it's quite sad to see kagome so angry and upset with inuyasha as he seems to legitimately care for her. i do like that you tied his never dying love for kikyo in there, though. it seems kagome is rather insecure about all of it and most of all very hurt and confused. but i also feel she is being a bit selfish and over emotional, but that's a woman for you! =P

also, what was up with the two ex's at the banquet? wow, talk about wrong place at the wrong time! oh, and nice inuyasha/kouga rivalry, liked it.

i am very excited to see what happens when sesshomaru and inuyasha acquire their youkai back, and i am also excited to see what will happen on the guy's day out!

great job so far, looking forward to more.

ah, finally made it to the end of this story so far. all in all, not too shabby. i feel this is much more of a girly fanfic though, it really doesn't suit a guy like myself reading it. the thing with kikyo being inuyasha's last wife though was quite interesting, and the foreshadowing with miroku telling sango she would one day be a great mother was also a nice touch.

i feel you stereotyped the girls in the fanfiction far too much though. not all girls eat when they are depressed and not all sisters are happy, hugging, and loving. they don't seem to fight or disagree much, and you think they would, especially living with each other. none of them seem very individual or unique, or interesting, for that matter. it's not that this story was boring to read, it was just an effort to read in some places because some parts didn't appeal to me. sure, plenty of things were happening, but none of them really floated my boat, if you get what i'm saying. that's not to say nothing did though, for that matter either.

the alternate universe was also a bit of a bother, it makes things much less interesting. not in the feudal era, no naraku, sango and rin are adopted, etc. however, i do think it was a very good idea for you to change the surroundings for the type of story you were going to write, so i guess it evens out. i do, however, think that it would be a really decent touch for you to have the girls and their men find their way to the feudal era somehow. just a suggestion, though.

going on, i also feel like the girls are very mary sue like, as in they are all perfect and have no flaws and are always the victims, never the offenders. sure, that's not necessarily a horrible thing, because i've read plenty of stories that had characters with plenty of those flaws and the stories were still excellent. it just couldn't hurt to model them a little more interesting or unique, though.

i do think you've done a good job of adding an antagonist to oppose each protagonist. perhaps not in character form always but always in some form. for example, kagome has to deal with inuyasha's late wife, kikyo, and inuyasha's sadness resulting from it. sango has to deal with miroku's child and the fact that he's a womanizer. and rin has to deal with kagura and the fact that sesshomaru is very soft spoken and slightly unapproachable and cold.

i also don't feel you've elaborated enough on the guy's relationships with each other. it couldn't hurt to set aside a chapter and dedicate it to each of them and how they live alone and how they interact with each other. sure, you revealed some snippets of how they do like in chapter one or in some other chapters where they address one another and talk.

and that's about it. don't think i haven't enjoyed reading this fic so far though, because i have. i just feel you could improve it some ways that might also nudge the plot line in a more interesting direction as well. can't wait to see how the annual party goes and how the rest of the story will turn out!