An awesome last couple of chapters, I really liked Saturn's intro as well as Rei Vs Haruka, given how devoted Haruka is and how serious the story seems to be it doesn't seem like there will be any chance for her to playfully flirt with Usagi so it scratched that itch for me to have her do it and then have Rei get possessive even if it wasn't the case.

As far as the possessing goes if you do continue to have this type of war fare is there a chance that Usagi will get possessed? I am just wondering because it happends so often to Mars that like with the Usagi carrying her bridal style (which I must say I found incredibly awesome.) it would be nice to see Mars bring Moon back for once.

I really enjoyed what appeared to me as a Shrek refrence in this chapter as well as Usagi being able to protect Rei by being a sheild, I found it very sweet.

please keep writing it is good.

lol

More please. :D

Minako is the best matador/bull-rider ever! I can totally imagine her shouting at Tokui and getting on her back like that. It's almost amazing how fast Usagi is; and it's all thanks to Rei. Again. Thanks for this wondreful chapter.

interesting update soon.

This was a very awesome chapter, and liked how Touki got her just deserts by Jupiter and Uranus! Also, I feel bad for poor Minako. *heals Minako's arm and hugs her tightly* Now I'm gonna pop into your fic for a quick moment. ^^ *starts pummeling Touki with a series of rapid punches to the face, punching her rapidly in the gut, stomp kicking her on her back multiple times, and finish her off in a DBZ-esque beam finisher* Okay, I'm done. ^^;; It's just that, I hate seeing a woman in pain, and I thought that Touki deserved it.

Oh, broken arm. Ouch.

Nice to see all the senshi are back together and in one piece, though it seems poor Venus really got one heck of a beating at the end. The Jupiter/Mercury interaction continues to crack me up; those two girls are never going to have a tender moment, are they? They constantly break spells by hurting each other.

I wouldn't want to be the remaining demons after this fight. If Pluto continues being protective of Venus the way she's been lately, someone will have hell to pay for her broken arm. Personally, I want to see Pluto snap.

Awesome to see Saturn enter the fray, and her father-daughter moment with Haruka was sweet. Now I'm just waiting to see if Chibi Moon will come as well, and then we'll have all the senshi in this hell of a fight.

Definitely worth the wait. You're on spring break now? Lucky, I'm still in school.

Update soon!

-addicted- O.o this is...this is good. I need more O.O what happens to Rei-chan and Haruka-chan? And Saturn! She's so cute but is she staying?? I need to know x.x

Keep going.

Wow, this is a pretty intense chapter, and I hope Rei and Haruka make it out alive. Plus I hope Makoto doesn't get infected, because she's too sweet and caring to be filled with hatred T_T

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Well, damn.

First Mars and Uranus are down for the count, and now it seems Jupiter's next on the list. Dammit, and I was hoping Michi could manage to snap Ruka out of it, too... but no luck there, I guess.

Now I can only hope how the remaining senshi will manage to cope, especially if Jupiter DOES fall like Uranus and Mars. Because if she does, you're left with Moon, Neptune, Mercury, Venus, and Pluto... and somehow, I get the feeling the number will only drop.

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Maybe Saturn and Chibi Moon will come and save the day?

Update soon! And sorry for the late review, I've been busy.

"Oh, come one!" - but do you mean "come on"? Also, what is a "situaiton"? Also, I don't quite know what it means when each "second seemed to move by slowest than the previous one."

Well, in any case, a good set-up. I guess I will have to read on to figure out what happens next.

Very good; I am wondering what will happen next.

For the most part, it has correct grammar and spelling, but I am wondering, what exactly is a "Niko"? Also, these two: "She heard was the shouting of her friends" and "It seems they are communicating you when you're asleep" - these two seem like errors.

Anyways, I do get a feeling of suspense. I wonder how the pairings will come about - keep it up!