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| Reviews for DeathScythe's Daughter |
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  Hehe 3/29/13 . chapter 1 You should make a sequel when he tells Spirit. |
| SnowyFlame 11/27/12 . chapter 1 SO adorable and cute!XD |
 flyyyyaway 8/18/12 . chapter 1Good and well written and REALISTIC! Not gooky random strange romance. This scene totally would have- and probably did, in their world- happen. :P |
| Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 1 That was adorable! I loved the end, how clueless Maka is, haha. Great work! |
| A.boy682 7/9/12 . chapter 1 soul lied so maka wouldn't go out with the boys so I think soul likes maka |
| Naruphonia13 7/4/12 . chapter 1 Finally, Fanfiction has changed the way you review, I like this new review box at the bottom XD. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this story, for multiple reasons. 1. Grammar and spelling is excellent (which is always a problem in most stories so I think this is an awesome characteristic in stories) 2. I could see this scenario happening (I love cannon stuff a lot) 3. Soul was completely in character. 4. and lastly: the scenario itself was rather unique, in fact, I haven't seen a story like this before, which is very refreshing to see! I don't really have any constructive criticism, on account of this being such a wonderful story. Perhaps you could have given Maka a chance to ask Soul what he was doing, and he replies with: "nothing" or something akin to that. That's really the only thing I would suggest, maybe adding in a little more lines for Maka, that's just about it. All in all, wonderful story and I really enjoyed reading! |
| duckie lover 151 5/18/12 . chapter 1 I don't know if you watch Fruits Basket, but this totally reminded me of the scene with Kyo and Tohru! I liked it, they both seemed in character, and it was an interesting little one-shot. Keep writing! |
| SmexySuperSaiyanGirlDeanmoe 3/5/12 . chapter 1 Nice story Snow |
| blackrozevalentine 10/20/11 . chapter 1 Nice work! You captured both the characters real well. Hopefully you continue. You really showed the relationship between Soul and Maka real well. I loved the bit about Soul and how he'd hurt them. |
| StarRose2011 10/20/11 . chapter 1 go soul! for not having a lowlife hit on Maka *fist pump in the air* By the way, awesome story i thought it was going to like farmer's daughter but you proved me wrong :D Soul and Maka together forever StarRose |
| ParadiseAvenger 7/8/11 . chapter 1 Very cute! |
| Lacrimosa Tomboy 7/5/11 . chapter 1 This was amazingly in character and was the perfect depiction of the relationship between Soul and Maka! Plus, I got a kick out of imagining what would have happened to those guys if they started dating Maka, then asked when they'd get to meet Spirit! XD |
| NobleBrokenBeauty 6/6/11 . chapter 1 Haha, so cute and perfectly in character. Good job! |
| Vein's Simply Tired 5/25/11 . chapter 1 Yep, it's the thought that counts this is short but sweet :D like it ,Vein |
| Serenade-Of-The-Insane 4/4/11 . chapter 1 really good can you please continue? ids love you forever if you did XD |
