WOAH. Loved it.

Firstly, YAY FOR JOHN/JACK! NO ONE DOES JOHN/JACK! I LIKE JOHN/JACK!
Ahem.
I like it. A few punctuation errors and I think it should be slightly longer, but on the whole it's good. ^^

Very good story. I really think that John has deep feelings for Jack. They'd make a very passionate couple ;-)

Beautiful, absolutly wonderful, brilliantly written, love Jack/John. :)

Aw!! As much as I lurve James Marsters and I like the character of Captain John, I didn't like him at the same time because he was the bad guy. This makes me feel so sorry for him! D=
Very well written. Good job!

~Samdum~

Hell, I'm just going to go through your whole profile! ^^ This STORY is beautiful, I heart Captain John.