 MissSparks 2009-11-08 . chapter 3You guys are crazy, aren't you? |
 x-GlitterEyes-x 2008-06-24 . chapter 4Loving it so far, update soon! Oh and more OCC for Pudding! |
 DSB95 2008-06-18 . chapter 4*is satisfied*
Wow...you weren't kidding when you said you put in 3 'muahaha's in the first page...impressive. I'd give you a pat on the back, but I'm afraid of waking you up...O.o...
Disclaimer...
Disclaimer: I do not know M-Chan. Rather, I did not know that M-Chan has a brain. I still don't know if she does.
Sorry, M-Chan, but...I...can't believe you either. Unless the world blows up. Then I'll believe you if you say "we're all gonna DIE!"
How did ZAKURO not even catch the fact that it was June, not August? And...WHY did Lettuce need her FINGERS? We should teach her to count by amputating her fingers. *grins evilly*
I met the Lord of Irony once. And the Lotd of Dark Humor. Queen Sarcasm is a wonderful concept, isn't she? And her husband isn't half bad either. We should all get together with them some day. I'm sure it'd be wonderful.
I happen to have my own opinion on future collabs, impossible as it seems. Here it is:
DON'T WRITE ANY MORE COLLABS.
Why? Easy.
YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS ONE FIRST.
And make the ending good. Or at least a REAL ending. 'Kay?
Well, I think I have managed to give you long reviews every time. It becomes longer:
This was a SHORT chapter. I think the A/Ns were long enough to count as part of the chapter.
Well, there was my review's period of fun! So, now I'm being harrased to go to bed, so I guess I'll review the next time you update. Or I update. M-Chan's story. PEOPLE! READ IT!
Okay, now I'm REALLY through. Done. Sorta. 'Till next time. CYAS! |
 Mew-Sahara 2008-06-18 . chapter 4Heheheh... April Fools! XD
'“Ry-Ry’s getting away, ya know?”' -Ahahaha, I call my brother 'Ry-Ry' because his name is Ryan. ;]
Ahh, this was hilarious! Good job you two! |
 x-GlitterEyes-x 2008-06-17 . chapter 3wow good so far. love this chapter specially, ^^. update asap |
 DSB95 2008-06-14 . chapter 3...T-the...the DISCLAIMER...NOT AGAIN! *melts into nothingness* Sorry, M-Chan. I guess your editor is taking leave for a while...
Hey, if I blew up your mind, M-Chan, how do you remember it? And BuKitten, how would she HAVE a mind for Bill Cosby to take over? Curious...
YAY! GO SARCASM!! WOOT!
I want ice cream too...T.T M-Chan...I don't think I'm gonna comment on your statement about being SPECIAL... Spork secrets? Zakuro not being mature? Pudding in charge? No--NO MWAHAHAS!? Ryou screaming like a girl?? HAS THE WORLD TURNED INSIDE OUT AND UPSIDE DOWN?! O.o...T.T...you're gonna make me go insane if you don't put a mwahaha in soon...
YAHOO! Bloody messes! BWAHAHA!
Hey, if you guys don't want to run the world, I'll take over for you. If I run the world, I can command you to do anything I want, right? NOW CONTINUE WITH THE STORY! *lightning flashes and fire flares behind me*
*begins kicking like Zakuro in chains* NO! NO! NO, BUKITTEN, NO! I WON'T! I WON'T EAT MY VEGGIES! I HTE VEGGIES! TEARS! oh...wait...I've used the term 'TEARS!' in EVERY REVIEW I HAVE LEFT FOR THIS STORY...oh well, what can I do?
It's too bad there wasn't too much fun to ruin, therefore, my review is depressed. So depressed, in fact, that it refuses to continue. Plus, it's probably long enough as it is. So, here's the end. ^^ |
 Very Annoied AIMelody 2008-06-14 . chapter 3more it is evily funny |
 Mew-Sahara 2008-06-13 . chapter 3See, M12, you were asking me about what you thought what you wrote was funny. HECK YES IT IS. This is PRIME material to back that up! *laughs*
Zakuro was used as a battering ram, a kid mafia, and Pudding having a gun... TOO GOOD! XD
'The two strange people bounded off, and I could hear the taller one talking on, “I want ice cream, too, BK! Buy me ice cream!”' -It's M12 and BuKitten! :D (See, M12, that part made me laugh the hardest, so you are, without a doubt, hilarious.) |
 BuKitten 2008-06-13 . chapter 1WOW! WHOEVER WROTE THIS IS GENIOUS! Oh wait... I'm in a bit of a pickle, aren't I? Specially since it took me a coupla times to spell pickle... I feel satisfied now that I've reviewed my own (FINE M12, OUR STORY) story. Yay.
Eat yer veggies. Dont drive drunk. Yes, M12, that includes you. And ESPECIALLY don't... err I'm outta things... got one: don't fall in love with fantasy people. trust me. i'd know.
BYE M12~ THIS WILL ARRIVE IN YOUR EMAIL SOON!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA! (even if you happen to have already read this while I typed it...) spamming M12's inbox is my personal job.
BYE ALL! |
 MewCuxie12 2008-06-13 . chapter 2HIYA!!:3 I'm not surprised Lettuce was fired. That useless Mary-Sue was only costing Ry-Ry money with all the valuable china she broke. In fact as employees all the girls were pretty much useless. Lettuce more so. Why is Ichigo evil? AND WHEN DID YOU TWO START DOING A COLLABO?!?!>_ |
 DSB95 2008-06-12 . chapter 2BuKitten, you can take over my brain, if you want. Feel free to corrupt it in any way you want. I don't actually think it would make too much of a difference, though, seeing as how it's already corrupted. How ELSE would I live through editing for M-Chan? ^^ NO! SO MUCH CRYING! I'm just glad they finally got the sense to crash an interview, though...it makes the whole story worth reading. XD BWAHAHAHA! *shivers trying to hold in laughter* “Oh yeah, I think I put a little something in that water I gave you... Maybe you were delusional from it. Tee, hee.” PERFECT! JUST PERFECT! And classic. Irony birds...*snicker* Irony is the BEST part of ANY dark humor. But...even if I DIDN'T review, nothing would happen to me anyway. Not even the awesome powers of sarcasm and irony and humor and chaos and darkness COMBINED could do anything. Because I am on Cloud Nine. From all the darkness. And humor. And sarcasm and irony and chaos. And the fact that they have already crashed down on top of me and they corrupted me far worse than you could ever, BuKitten. If I ruined your fun...HA! MISSION #2 COMPLETE! If not...Oh well. I'll just have to try next chapter. WHICH IS WHY YOU HAVE TO GET YOUR NEXT CHAPTER OUT! SO THAT I CAN RUIN YOUR FUN AGAIN! =D Ah...I think getting out of school today has made me a bit hyper...O.o...
I kind of have one question, though...WHAT IS WITH YOU GUYS AND DOUBLING YOUR DISCLAIMERS?! Well, actually, just M-Chan. There are two disclaimers for BOTH chapters. *throws Pudding's grenade at M-Chan's head* OOPS. Sorry. Did I light your hair on fire? O.o Lemme fix it. *bashes M-Chan over the head* There. All fixed. =D NOW YOU FIX IT!
Anyway, sorry. Went a little spaztic there, eheh. but it BOTHERS ME~ T.T
LALALALALA~
Now I'm bored. I need another chapter. PLEASE!? *looks at with begging eyes* Is it working yet?
Once again, my review is insanely long, and once again, it must come to it's sad end. Aw...poor review. TEARS! Actually, I think the NEXT chapter should be called tears, since Zakuro will be IN tears when her interview is crashed. At least, she should be. Now that my afternote is through with, I'm really gonna end this review. No, really, I will. Eventually. Okay, fine. I'll end it now, since I really don't have anymore to say...^^' |
 sonata hirano 2008-06-12 . chapter 2so col they are going to crash an interview |
 sonata hirano 2008-06-12 . chapter 1i loved it but isnt it the same idea as crazygirlas fic" its hard to love you" |
 Mew-Sahara 2008-06-11 . chapter 2IRONY BIRDS~. XD
*collapses from lack of oxygen after laughing too hard this chapter*
Ahahha this was just too good: '“Err.. Say a word and I’ll kill you and then I’ll track down and kill your family and friends!” I shouted at the kids, and they all screamed and ran away.' XD
And then the 5-year-old SWAT team... CLASSIC. *bursts out laughing while holding her gut*
MORE COLLAB! MORE MORE MORE~! |
 Kurisuten Ichikish 2008-06-10 . chapter 1*gasp* PIZZA MENACE! Are you sure that the pizza menace isn't me, because I do that. A lot. Except it was at Home Depot, Wal-Mart, and Starbucks. :]
Update? =3 |
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