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Anna
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
:) Thanks for the big smile on my face :)
bethyboomarch2
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
Whoa, that was hot! Literally! Haha, that was a terrible joke...anyways, I thought it was fantastic! Hope to see more soon...

Smiles and Hugs,
Bethany
Ringelsocke
2008-10-19 . chapter 1
HA! Very cool (in each way!)!
I like your idea about the sun burner! *gg*
Especially the last sentence from Mick!
clairlz
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
cute. all of us who burn easy should have access to a Mick with a freezer. :)
elwren75
2008-06-26 . chapter 1
I just had the worst day I think I've ever had at work, and you and MickBeth have made it all better. Now I wish I had a sunburn! Great writing as ever. Thanks.
LittleDrusilla
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
That made me laugh. Thanks!
EMO TWILIGHT MOONLIGHT LUVER
2008-06-20 . chapter 1
you have to write more to the story
Mamashirl
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
Love that last line... haha
p3karen
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
frozen lobster lol, cute one-shot :)
baywinger
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
Hee. I found this here, too! Yay, me!

Still tickled the funny bone, absolutely great job.
Wildfire101
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
That was awesome!! You can totally capture the image of a horrible sunburn and how to treat it!! From past experiences, I would've love to have been that Beth!!

i applaud u

Beth
rentemotion
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
that was adorable!
moonjat54
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
Funny, I know the pain of sunburn and I imagine Mick would feel pretty good. I hope he continues to help when she starts to peel. Poor Beth.
nightcap
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
ROAR!! Frozen Lobster! I'll bet he was chuckling about that for awhile.

Fun story!
PhoebeTheQueenOfDragons
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
I liked that
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