Aw... Poor Naruto-kun... The story Sasuke was telling him would have made me angry with him too... Silly should have shut-up...
Anywho, fantastic job as per normal. The emotion was there, the character was there (Surprisingl consitering Sasuke was telling him a Fairytale... o.0) and the SasuNaru was there. lol. It was AMASINGLY well written too, so 5/5 from me!