will you continue this story it's really good

an interesting chapter...

Shame that it seems that you're not continuing this story...

is she ok? and i hate dumbledore, also i dont want harry to go to hogwarts when he turns 12yr

please tell me she finds out

I like the slightly dark Hera but I don't like her splitting her soul.

Oh, and though she seems somewhat unbalanced, I love your Hera. A very colorful OC with her twisted allure. I find her more fun than even our dear Bella.

Woa... I really, really like this story. The premise is startlingly different from any other HP fan-fictions that I've came across on this site. The Greek mythological references were a nice touch, and you've built an interesting background for the magical Greek society in your AU. There are also enough puzzles and mysteries to keep me wanting to read more. Hope you'll continue with this story. Am definitely looking forward to your next update.

I'm zipped Albus

"I'm zipped"? I can't really see a thousand-year-old hat being conversant with American slang.

If any of you know [what's wrong with this chapter], feel free to tell me what I am missing or what's different with this chapter so I can fix it

Rather difficult to do, since none of us know your vision for this story. But you're right; something *does* seem to be a bit... off.

Pretty good. I could wish for longer chapters with more description, though. What you have is pretty good, but going into things in more depth, including descriptions, would make it so much better.

Fawns are the offspring of deer. Fauns are the half-goat, half-human beings. But I'm having trouble envisioning fauns as being responsible enough to run a banking institution. They're fun-loving creatures who delight in music, dance and, of course, sex.

Even Blinds were bound to notice owls flying about in the daytime.

Er, you DO know that there are breeds of owl that are active for each time of day? Some breeds are nocturnal (active at night), some diurnal (active during the day), and some are crepuscular (active mostly at twilight).

True, owls are more noticeable in settled areas than doves, but one wouldn't think doves would be large enough and strong enough to carry post and packages.

i loved it!

Im going to have to completely reread this. Now if i could only find the time...

Great chapter.

great story so far and i love reading it so update soon and keep on writing.

Did whatever kind of attack Asmodeus have mess up the blood adoption? For a minute there, he seemed to revert to Harry Potter, with no memory of his life as Asmodeus. Or is Dumbledore having Poppy give him something that will counteract the blood adoption and curse? Hera ignored the warning from the bird on the fireplace, maybe because it spelled out Harry as opposed to Asmodeus. She may regret not listening to the warning, as it gives time for Dumbledore to undermind her hold on Asmodeus/Hera. I'm curious to hear more about Hera and Asmodeus's time growing up with her. She seems to be a Greek Bellatrix Lestrange, with potential to being an even worse human being, if her actions towards her father, brother, husband and cousin are any indication. It is also clear that Asmodeus's childhood was not all sunshine and roses, there is definitely some darkness hinted at(the backhand slap and the kiss for example). Looking forward to the next chapter.