It's ingenious that you visualized Hokuto as Yuuko's dressmaker, because now that I think about it, it's all so very possible! xD
Great, great job!

nk

This is good, this is good. Keep it up!

thats a good story good work

Smart little one shot you've got here. I mean all of the indirect dialouge was well played. I enjoyed this so much. I mean every character was on point. Plus, as I think that it was your goal, the feeling that Hokuto and Yuuko have been long-time pals or buisness associates or something of that nature you know? Especially with that last line. I kind of got that feeling of dread since we all know what's going to happen next. (-sobs in a corner-) This was a wonderful read. I'm glad I came across it!!

Love,
RIn

*grin* Oohh...