I like this one, albeit it's a bit more convoluted that the other two.

It has a lot of genuine emotion--which I like--but personally I would like to see the characters developed a bit more.

What a great ending! I knew they'd work it out. :)

Interesting twist of events. I can't wait to read about them having their heart to heart.

It was great the way he just walked in a planted one on her! :)

I loved Tuvok joking and I'm impressed with the way you've written him.

'Did our resident Borg forget her social skills again?'

Excellent line!

I'm curious as to what Q wants. Definitely feeling his angst. It's great. :)

Love it when they cry! The end of this scene is so romantic! But now I feel even worse for Seven. :(

I like how *everyone* is conspiring against them now. But technically, Neelix *is* a member of the crew even if he's not a commissioned (or even Federation) officer.

Damn, this is sad. I do have to say I'm not so fond of your referral to the characters by their races, especially since Chakotay is not Indian, he's Native American. (An Indian is someone from India).

As CMO, I run the Universe. LOL. Bullied by a hologram. Again. Classic. One thing - if Tuvok had just exited the Ready Room when he made the call, doesn't that mean the whole bridge crew overheard? 'Cause that would be kind of embarrassing...

Uh-oh, Chak's in trouble... *rubs hands together in anticipation*

Go Tuvok, voice of reason! Why is he the only one that has faith in the captain and commander?!

Wow, I think I have to side with Seven here. She may be pig-headed but the other two are being unnecessarily mean, and ganging up on her for some admittedly valid philosophies. What's gotten into everyone?

Huh. Seems like when Chak & KJ fight, the negative energy pervades the whole ship, and everyone's testy. One little thing - B'Elanna is spelled like that (not Blanna).