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| Firehedgehog 2008-09-29 ch 2,  | abusenice, very nice |
| Burning DragonSword 2008-09-13 ch 2, | abuseIt looks promising,though I can't say I've ever read anything like this. It's good to see someone with an original idea once in a while instead of the same over used plot. |
| inevitable 2008-08-13 ch 2, | abuseI like roy from FMA. I like his style and personality. I hope naruto grows up to be like him. Will naruto be the around the same age as elric brothers and what alchemy will he perform? Hope you update soon. |
| Funabisenu 2008-08-04 ch 2, | abuseRoy really is a sweetheart. :) I luv Naru-chan! please update! |
| MysticMaiden 18 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI hope yu update soon this is really great.Cant wait to see how the future will go between Roy and Naruo. |
| Pyro The Fox of Fire 2008-06-27 ch 2, | abusethat was great keep it up |
| Neco-chan 2008-06-12 ch 2, | abuseI really, really like this story. Please continue it and update son!! ^_^ |
| Sakura Lisel 2008-06-10 ch 2, | abuseAw... Poor Naruto! I hope Roy takes good care of him and teaches him the ways of the Alchemist. Is anyone from Konoha going to come looking for him while their on the road? Or will they get back to Central before then? Naruto's eight years old, but Roy's ablet to carry him like he was a younger, and smaller, child without problems?? |
| LuckyGirl17 2008-06-10 ch 2, | abuseaww poor naruto i can't wait to hear the rest of the story :) |
| SUNTAN140 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abusei like it please continue please |
| Honebar 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseThis looks like it could be an interesting start. I'm looking forward to seeing what you will be doing with this. |