 pamellka 2009-12-03 . chapter 31Still amazing as ever! Wonder how many more chapters there'll be... |
 G 2009-12-03 . chapter 31 If it wasn't for Genma I'd almost think this was pretty much over. The battle I mean. Voldemort shouldn't die from just that. He's not exactly attached to his body.. Though I don't remember how many horcruxes were destroyed. Was this supposed to be a trilogy?
Anyway, I liked the chapter. I found no part boring, or unclear. Except perhaps the beginning, but that was mostly because I didn't quite remember where the last chapter ended.
Even if Voldemort dies now (I doubt it for no other reason than "it's Voldemort") there should be at least two more chapters (or one longer one) to tie it all up. I don't think it's more than three considering your comment of finishing it up before the end of the year.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! |
 chessvain 2009-12-03 . chapter 31really good, i rather enjoyed dumbledore thinking he had to help these poor helpless shinobi because he had brought the big bad deatheaters down on them. Only for his help to be singularly not needed. nice to see the inazuka's in action though i am still hoping for the aburame's and hyuuga's takeing part. any ways really liked this hope the next chapter comes out soon. |
 Chindu Prince Of Darkness 2009-12-02 . chapter 31Wow, Harry totally Owned Voldemort. Swet. |
 MadnessLover 2009-12-02 . chapter 31Great story. |
 prudiisten 2009-12-02 . chapter 31 Nice to see moldyshorts finialy die. And i like to see Gen in action. |
 DevilChile 2009-12-02 . chapter 31mwahaha talk about the power the dark lord knows not XD lol. the power of sheer desperation. human instincts are very very powerful, too bad the snake faced scumbag doesn't understand that. |
 Sakura Lisel 2009-12-02 . chapter 4Harry and Kakashi should DEMAND that Dumbldork at least let them WRITE to the Hokage or someone back home and tell them they didn't abandon Konoha in order to betray everyone they love. The git OWES them that much for kidnapping them, so he should at least help prevent them from wrongfully being labeled as traitors and Missing Nin for the rest of their lives by their village, and probably be severly punished OR put to death the moment they set foot back in Konoha when they finally DO get to go home again for unwillingly going AWOL without warning, because of what HE did. Their one day disappearance from Konoha is probably already getting them in trouble now, so the longer it takes for them to write home the more trouble their going to be in as everyone makes the wrong assumptions about why their gone since theres no sign of them having been taken against their will anywhere. *lol* |
 ennui deMorte 2009-12-02 . chapter 31Excellent chapter!!
I especially love the things that Harry thinks about when he doesn't want to die--seeing Tenzou again and watching Naruto grow up, helping him overcome everything against him. Also loved the way that Harry was absently observing Voldemort's lack of technique when stabbing.
Tenzou's dialogue with Itachi was also wonderful~ Itachi's simple, logical reasoning that no matter how great a clan they are, the Uchiha are still only one clan and how they have no chance of succeeding. Then the soft little addition that he has a brother was totally sweet ~♥~ It is also something that Tenzou can totally empathize with--he knows that Harry feels the same about Naruto and that he would do the same to protect him.
But where is Gai? Probably somewhere else, knocking Uchiha heads and keeping a running total so that when his eternal rival does return he can prove how well he does against the Sharingan. Dumbledore waking up in the hospital does show that the Sandaime does have some sympathy--that and he hasn't got what he wants from him yet.
Looking forward to seeing more~ |
 Weasel Fu 2009-12-02 . chapter 31Oh! Nice action chapter. Really good job of building up the tension with what's going on with Gemna and whether Dumbledore will kidnap Harii again while he's out. I really liked that the Inuzuka got their chance to shine. Also, it was nice to get to see Itachi as a person instead of an untouchable icon. You're doing really well on this story and I can't wait to see where you take it next! |
 Escalus 2009-12-02 . chapter 31Oh my...but doesn''t Voldemort still have some horcruxes tashed away? Or is my memory bad? |
 Nemrut 2009-12-02 . chapter 31That was anticlimactic but a longer fight would have been unrealistic so I guess you had no other choice. The more I think about it, the better Voldemord's death becomes. I hope we won't come back somehow, as I am unsure whether or not you have included the horcruxes in this story.
but great chapter. |
 Eromancer 2009-12-02 . chapter 31oh unexpected! |
 Little Minamino 2009-12-01 . chapter 31All things considered, Voldemort's death was surprisingly easy, and yet I don't feel like it wasn't earned. That's how I felt at the end of the seventh book actually. The last battle between Harry and Voldemort happened so fast that I had to read it four or five times before I actually realized what had happened. This was a good battle though. I look forward to seeing what you'll throw at us next. And I can't help but worry that Genma has something not so great on his mind for Kakashi. Hopefully I'm wrong ^-^ Keep up the great work! |
 Ribbonseal 2009-12-01 . chapter 31so awesum~!
I love how Harry won against Voldemort! Though Voldemort's fighting seemed more physical then in canon. I would expect he would float away from the attacks only when unavoidable and use his wand to just block everything. Still liked it!
please update soon! |