That was very interesting. Jasper played the vigilante once or twice himself.

That was really good. An interesting take on the seven deadly sins. I've never thought about them in reference to Jasper (strange, I know) and you made it work really well.

I don't know why, but I SERIOUSLY love me some dark Jasper. Is that bad? Oh well, he's way too hot evil for my own good.

He's less of a monster than that priest.

And I agree whole-heartedly with you in the sense that before Alice Jasper was in a very, very dark place. All he knew was the violence of the wars in the South and that must've had some serious effect on his sense of morals and goodness.

I absolutely love this. Possibly my favorite out of all of your stories. This wasn't just out of the box; it was genius. I can see this actually happening in Jasper's former life. Bravo.

Oh I just LOVE him! He's absolutely adorabe! Okay, mabe that's just to my sick twisted mind, but he's totally awesome! Nice job!

I love how you used the seven deadly sins in this. I also loved how you described each of them. Wonderfully done. Beautiful.

damn, that was so... tormenting...and I felt like I was actually a monster..

phew, thanks for putting that into perspective,

cuz; now when I become a vampire I will tottally stay true to the vegetarian menu. jealous? LMFAO. jookes.

anyways, you have some good thinking going on in that head of yours... :) go you!

Love-

Sara Cullen

ps; Yes. I said WHEN I become a vampire, not IF I become a vampire, cuz I will. and you can do nothing bout it. :D

pss; im not 3yrs old. Im fourten. im not delusional either, im just convinced theres a *twilight* going on somewhere near...

or not near. whatever.

strange... but deep. Different... but truthful. I liked it in that strange "I'll like anything to do with Jaz"

I had read almost every

of your histories and I think

this one is the Darkest, but

still it's pretty good

I alsothink Jasper was that dark

pre-Alice

wow...tht was amazing. I think this Jasper can be related to Edward durng his rebellious years. anyhow, the portrayal was perfect

Wow... that was actually quite good. I'm shocked that I like it...

OME!... i loved this one-shot!*-*

just...perfect!

Good job Jasper!

Your NOT that kind of monster :)

I always said it... Sometimes people do a bad thing for a good reason, and sometimes people do a good thing for a bad reason... I think this story emphasizes that.

SO amazing! you definitley potrayed him perfectly :)

This was incredible. I loved it. I really like reading about the Jasper before Alice, he really was very dark. I don't think it was OOC. That's the way I saw him pre Alice. But that could just be me. Wonderful.