|Reviews for Seven Sins|
| Siriusmunchkin 5/20/11 . chapter 1
That was very interesting. Jasper played the vigilante once or twice himself.
| blowbe 1/7/11 . chapter 1
That was really good. An interesting take on the seven deadly sins. I've never thought about them in reference to Jasper (strange, I know) and you made it work really well.
I don't know why, but I SERIOUSLY love me some dark Jasper. Is that bad? Oh well, he's way too hot evil for my own good.
He's less of a monster than that priest.
And I agree whole-heartedly with you in the sense that before Alice Jasper was in a very, very dark place. All he knew was the violence of the wars in the South and that must've had some serious effect on his sense of morals and goodness.
| SarahCullen17 8/7/10 . chapter 1
I absolutely love this. Possibly my favorite out of all of your stories. This wasn't just out of the box; it was genius. I can see this actually happening in Jasper's former life. Bravo.
| whisperingmist 6/26/10 . chapter 1
Oh I just LOVE him! He's absolutely adorabe! Okay, mabe that's just to my sick twisted mind, but he's totally awesome! Nice job!
| Lady Dragona 5/5/10 . chapter 1
I love how you used the seven deadly sins in this. I also loved how you described each of them. Wonderfully done. Beautiful.
| Bite.Me.Mr.Cullen 1/14/10 . chapter 1
damn, that was so... tormenting...and I felt like I was actually a monster..
phew, thanks for putting that into perspective,
cuz; now when I become a vampire I will tottally stay true to the vegetarian menu. jealous? LMFAO. jookes.
anyways, you have some good thinking going on in that head of yours... :) go you!
ps; Yes. I said WHEN I become a vampire, not IF I become a vampire, cuz I will. and you can do nothing bout it. :D
pss; im not 3yrs old. Im fourten. im not delusional either, im just convinced theres a *twilight* going on somewhere near...
or not near. whatever.
| AussieNinjaChick 7/10/09 . chapter 1
strange... but deep. Different... but truthful. I liked it in that strange "I'll like anything to do with Jaz"
| Naie Black 6/28/09 . chapter 1
I had read almost every
of your histories and I think
this one is the Darkest, but
still it's pretty good
I alsothink Jasper was that dark
| cool-gal95 6/3/09 . chapter 1
wow...tht was amazing. I think this Jasper can be related to Edward durng his rebellious years. anyhow, the portrayal was perfect
| Lady Laurelin Ancalimon 5/19/09 . chapter 1
Wow... that was actually quite good. I'm shocked that I like it...
| M.-Way 5/13/09 . chapter 1
OME!... i loved this one-shot!*-*
| Edwardjustproposed 4/20/09 . chapter 1
Good job Jasper!
Your NOT that kind of monster :)
| LJ Meents 4/13/09 . chapter 1
I always said it... Sometimes people do a bad thing for a good reason, and sometimes people do a good thing for a bad reason... I think this story emphasizes that.
| SarahxEmmett 3/23/09 . chapter 1
SO amazing! you definitley potrayed him perfectly :)
| orangemice311 3/8/09 . chapter 1
This was incredible. I loved it. I really like reading about the Jasper before Alice, he really was very dark. I don't think it was OOC. That's the way I saw him pre Alice. But that could just be me. Wonderful.