I believe you know who I am, considering you suddenly talked to me via Messenger.

Anyway, I do enjoy both your new DMC fanfic very much. I could read them in a relaxing way and I was able to feel every passion and heart you put into how you write the story.

The characters remained in character and the plot seemed intriguing and shows a lot of promises in being a good, well-developed storyline.

Though I am a bit curious about this Gamaliel whom called DMC and the whole artifact thing is kinda...classic.

Also, one last thing that made my day today:

"See ya later; and no pizza while I’m away!"

That has to be the best line from Dante in this chapter. Though I would be expecting more in the future.

Keep up your good work. Take a well-earned rest as well.

Take care and I look forward seeing your next chapter.

Rozen

It's generally a bad idea to instead of describing the moves performed by your characters use the moves names like everyone knows them.

Instead of simply saying "he performed a stinger" describe it. The action, the grip on his sword, the positioning of it, how he moves his body.

Makes for a much more interesting read then simply "He performed a stinger easily dispatching the creature."

I'll even throw in an example since I think this story has potential.

"Dante twisted his body to the right, his cape flowing behind him as he spun around. Raising Rebellion high above his head he brought it down as the beast lunged at the spot he had been a second ago, with inhuman accuracy and strength Dante brought down the heavy sword upon the monsters neck, neatly severing its head from its body."

Also don't always refer to the Beasts as The Beasts, use other names for them, monsters and demons work.

Ah this is good.

I've played parts 1-3 but only managed to beat 2 & 3 I had borrowed all three of them well not at the same time, and when I played 1 I didn't have a memory card despite getting really far in the game and my sister turned it off and everything was lost.

I haven't played 4 yet (don't have an Xbox or a PS3) so um yeah. This is good and you should continue.