This is so...Depressing...But good. I love the character of Max and would of so totally cried if he had died in the series. Looking forward to reading more fromm you.

So cute ! I really loved it !

this is a great story! i love it. it's great how booth cares about brennan.

Uh.. it broke my heart! The desciptions are incredibly great. This is really some serious story. Although Im much more happier with the resolution on the series for this episode (even though I dont agree with the veredict in some ways and agree in others...), this alternative choice you created is very heart breacking and overwhelming by Booth and Brennans connection.
But I did love and enjoyed reading this fic.
I'm looking forward from more from you.

I really liked this. I think you did a good job with Max at the beginning. I can totally see him reacting like that if he were to get the death penalty. Not caring about himself, only thinking of Tempe.

I liked the part with Booth and Brennan, too. How she hit him and then let him comfort her. That seemed in character as well. Great job!