 Kyra4 2009-02-02 . chapter 3Oh! Holy Shiznit! Another chapter, yay!
Go Ron! Be a total Douche Bag! Keep up the good work! Drive her away so she can fall into Draco's arms!
Go Hermione! Get all sloppy drunk and experimental and easy! Wait! Wrong guy! Abort! Abort!
Go Draco! Be all insomniac sleep-warm tousle-hared groggy stumbling around angsty doing MUGGLE stuff in the middle of the night! That is so fucking HOT you have no idea! And... yeah, bite the SHIT out of her! That's hot too!
(Kay I'm feeling a little wacked out tonight but very excited about the update! :-) |
 Blue-Stardust 2009-02-02 . chapter 3He bit her? Like a vampire??
Good story though, I enjoyed reading it!!
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 IIO 2009-01-31 . chapter 3Good to see you not give up on this story.it's the only HP story i'm following. |
 Chanteur d'ombre 2009-01-30 . chapter 3BWAH HAHAHAHA!! Last line ftw!! |
 Akira M 2009-01-30 . chapter 3great story. hope to see you aroeund more! |
 Ookami Otome 2008-08-30 . chapter 2Go on go on I'm intrigued :D |
 IIO 2008-08-24 . chapter 2great story, hope you continue... |
 Ky 2008-08-01 . chapter 2 I'm not gonna go back and find the exact quote but it was when Draco asked Harry if he was hitting on him. And it wasn't only the words, but the tone of voice and the facial expression you gave him - All of it, together, was what just about made me fall off my chair and pee on the floor. Honestly, you're so great at inserting these wicked little slivers of comedy here and there that are just hysterically funny! It's a talent I don't have. I mean I try for comic relief now and then, but you just have a genius for it :o) |
 Sir Swearsalot 2008-07-30 . chapter 1 Are you fucking kidding me!?! I didn't know you could disable the profanity filter! That's why I was swearing like a fucking sailor in my last review - I just figured it would all show up as a bunch of fucking little asterisks! So I went out of my way to swear MORE because I happen to like those goddamn, cunt-licking little asterisks! And what do I get for my trouble? FFN dicking me around as per usual, making me look like a fucking pottymouth when I'm really not. I'm goddamn fuck shit cocksucking NOT!
Damn it.
Shit hell bitch fag fuck.
And another thing... they erased the quotes that I carefully gathered in my other review. Yeah, that makes me look real great when I'm all like, "I love it when Draco says this:" and then there's nothing there. Way to make me come off like a goddamn inbred moron! I was going to use THIS review to gather them all up again, but in the end, I'm just too lazy.
Too fucking lazy by half.
Oh by the way, I disabled my profanity filter now too.
Fuckity fuck fuck fuck. |
 AnneChristy 2008-07-28 . chapter 2I love that Ron is a jack ass.
it makes me smile a little bit. |
 Blueberry Babe 2008-07-27 . chapter 2interesting.. i would like to see where you take this.. thanks for the story.. |
 Kyra4 2008-07-27 . chapter 2Wow! I'm getting the impression that this is shaping up to be quite a long story! I forget, is this story from when I wrote you "To All A Good Night"? Because that was only 6 chapters, and moderate-length chapters, not long like these. Are you trying to make me feel all inadequate and shit?
Oh, crap. Between the last paragraph and this one I've gone and got tipsy. This is gonna be all full of typos and shit now. Oh, well... what did I wanna say again? Um... I don't like this Michael person. At all. I sense a real jackass there. Of course Draco, back when he first lands himself in the middle of Michael & Rebecca's family, was something of a jackass himself, wasn't he? Huh. I am SO intrigued by his years in Muggle America.
I'm also intrugued by his new "delivery boy" profession. My poor scratched up Draco-kins!! Now I REALLY want to huggle him! But only because you kept his hair nice and WHITE blond instead of piss yellow (YUCK)... thanks for that!
And who's this Glenda bitch? RIGHT off the bat I don't like her... where is this going? I should be seeing something here, something about the way in which Draco is holding the glasses; there's something there, you come right out and SAY as much... but I'm missing it at the moment. Maybe it's just that he was carrying them "Muggle style"... balancing them instead of flaoting them (and that's an endearing image btw...) but maybe it's more...?
Do you know what? I ordered some clothes through a catalogue and along with my order they sent me a book. A Harlequin Romance sample. I opened it to the first page and this is what I read. "'Seller agrees to pay the cost of soil removal in the northwest corner of the property,' Gary read from the sheath of papers in front of him."
Sheath of papers? SHEATH of papers!?!? Are you fucking KIDDING me? The word should be sheaf - a sheath is for a goddamn sword! That's the sort of error I expect to see from 14-year-old writers on this site, but this is a published adult who is getting paid, and handsomely I bet, to write this shit! It makes me SICK. If THAT is what people are paying money to read, then you and I, we SO have to start writing cheesy romances together.
Kay?
Oh, and here comes Ron! This'll be fun! |
 Hajnalmadar 2008-07-26 . chapter 2Very promising story! Can't wait to read more:) |
 grangerinvestigations 2008-07-24 . chapter 2This story should have more reviews. Period. Great furthering of the plot and I remain very intrigued by your Draco. I like the idea of him living with muggles. Great job. |
 UrNodens 2008-07-01 . chapter 1Interesting. I have to wonder what will come of Harry and Ron, though, given the intended pairing, since they seem to have a notable presence in this so far. |