Really nice one-shot. I like the in depth feelings Anakin has and how simple the story is despite the complications that you explore in his thoughts. It also works well with his character development and thoughts before Conquest.

It was a pleasure reading your work and I hope you write another Anakin/Tahiri piece soon.

Best,

-Don "QuixoticQuest"

I liked this piece; it's not too long, or too 'thinky' either. Good job!