Reviews for Better Left to Chance

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Zeakari 2008-09-19 ch 4,	abuseI know I'm going to sound awful for this, but the thought of a Who exploding during an operation makes me laugh, and also wonder what the heck the doctors were using to operate. xD Oh, you're making him out to be new at the mayor thing? I mean, not new at it, just not mayor for long. But wait... his dad wasn't there in the movie, Ned was mayor. Oh the sense of foreboding. Aw, that's such a sweet moment, the argument at the end. XD I've never known an argument to be so cute!
Zeakari 2008-09-19 ch 3,	abuseAgain, the beginning is absolutely adorable, especially Ned's little 'you should stop hoarding them' thing. Jeez, why are you so good at writing Ned?? Scratch that, Ned and Sally together, their conversations are so well-written and cute and I can see them doing all that. Offended if they called the hospital before her mom? Wow, she must be VERY possessive. Well jeesh, no doctors to help, just to clean up the babies?? Wow... "/they're/ only the parents!" I think I know some people like that. I like how Jojo got his name, that's cute.
Zeakari 2008-09-19 ch 2,	abuseAw, the beginning sucked me right in, it was so sweet! Ned, Ted, and Ed, that's cute XD Aw... that's so sad about the mother leaving. Though I can't help but be amused with the way you described his grace, that's pretty good. And I like that about the word 'wrong', that's a really good point. An old man crying to get his own way... that's funny! And of course he's just fine, no problem, after he gets what he wants. This is so cute! I can actually see Ned doing all that, placing his hands on her belly and talking to it and all that. But wait... two weeks? That seems a bit short. I know this is Whoville, but two weeks still seems insanely short. I would think at least make it take as long as a cat and make it nine weeks. But it is your story. Wow, a 'quivering bundle of emotions ready to burst at any minute' ... that sounds like our Ned! Wow... I have to say, you are like on a totally different level of writing that I can only hope to one day achieve. Wow...
Zeakari 2008-09-19 ch 1,	abuseI can relate to him, I've had a lot of times where I've felt the same way. Surrounded by what I've made and what I want to do, yet can't bring myself to be creative. X) This is very well-written, actually, and I feel kinda bad for not reading it before.
NigaleCross 2008-08-12 ch 15,	abuseAlright, a girl gets to be mayor.
NigaleCross 2008-08-12 ch 14,	abuseSomething bad must have happened to the chairman to make him wired the way he is.
AquaMermaid6 2008-08-12 ch 15,	abuseThe end? Already? Ok seriously that was an awesome story, you're so good at writing Ned in character. Jojo's confession about being mayor and the rest of that conversation was just perfect. There definately would be a lot of awkward pauses in that conversation and Jojo didn't talk more than he would (some people make him way out of character and have him talk too much). Everything was just.. wow Sorry, I can't come up with anything more to say other than I'd love to read more HHaW fics from you if you ever decide to write any more.(but that's up to you of course)
NikChik-11 2008-08-11 ch 15,	abuseTHE END?! Omg... But it was SOO GOOD. XD So good! One of the BEST. STORIES. EVER. O dA page? MUST SEE!
WLiiAfanatic 2008-08-11 ch 15,	abuseI probably shouldn't have read this since I haven't seen the movie yet, but it was hard enough waiting for it to be finished so I could read it all at once. And I'm so glad I didn't wait any longer. This story is freakin' amazing. Like, REALLY freakin' amazing. Probably the best thing you've ever put on this site. Ned was just... wow. Too incredible for words. You're SO good at writing caring fathers. And husbands. Having ninety-seven kids would totally be worth it if I had a guy like Ned ;P I loved Zaneeta, too. Her conversation with VonFrood on Bring Your Child To Work Day made me crack up. And she made me cry when she was trying so hard to be strong for her father when Claire died. That whole chapter made me cry, actually. God, just picturing Ned with that poor, helpless little girl in his arms... I'm tearing up again just thinking about it! And on a lighter note... oh my gosh, it must have been so much fun coming up with all those names! At least, I would've thought it was fun. My name is in there, actually. I'm one of the girls that flooded the bathroom ;P Again, amazing-to-the-fifth-power story. I really hope to see more Horton fics from you!
aisarete 2008-08-11 ch 15,	abuseWhat an amazing journey this has been! I'm glad to have been swept along in the laughter and tears, and had the chance to watch the McDodd family grow. It was a wonderful experience.
Nightw2 2008-08-11 ch 15,	abuseHey there. Awesome job on the wrap-up to this story. You did a truly great job on the emotional content, exchanges and characterizations.
Reva Ewdrow 2008-08-11 ch 15,	abuseOMG I LOVE THIS AAW its over? no! its to awesome to be over! but it was an excellent ending, so fantastic! i love it! great job!
JigokuHana 2008-08-11 ch 15,	abuseclap a wonderful story ^_^ nice ending too.
Reva Ewdrow 2008-08-08 ch 14,	abuseoh poor ned great job with Ms. yelp, she was very much in character!
Nightw2 2008-08-07 ch 14,	abuseHey there. Thanks again for going to the trouble of sharing your work with us. As usual, you did a great job on the scenes, exchanges and emotional content. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chapter as soon as time will allow.

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