That was funny and informative. I love science!

I like how you included the fact that Link found the information a little annoying, but put up with Navi anyway. Also, I thought the ending was really good. It had both Link showing an interest in the physics, and something that Navi can't explain with it. Although I think that everything in our world could someday be explained by science, I don't apply the same idea to Hyrule.

Also, I enjoyed the personality you gave Navi, in wanting to prove to Link that she is smart, but not really meaning to teach him or anything. Another funny part was how many of these lessons Link has to learn through experience.

One really funny line was Link's "Because a monster told me to when I beat him?".

I don't know why, but I really liked the last line.

I guess it was fun because it was part satire, part science lesson, part Zelda story.

Great job!

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Definitely education. I just skimmed.

I did like that twist at the end.

For a school project, I would probably give it a 87 percent or something around there.

For a fanfic, 4 out of 10.

Great story. The last scene was really cute.

I'm sure your physics teacher looked at this the same way my English professor looked at my LxLight Death Note fan fiction.

You or Me: ^_^

Them: O.o or ^^'

Very cute story - See, Navi CAN be useful!

A friend of mine showed this to me and I have three words to say to you: I love you. Actually, let me tack on some more of those words: I love you a LOT and forever! That was great. Absolutely fantastic!!

Adorable. It looks like you had fun with your class project. Hyrule and science - who knew? Clever. And the ending was priceless.

Your one shot was the first Zelda fanfic I've ever read (Trying to break the Harry potter rut) and I'm very glad I did. It was super cute. I hope you got a good grade on it :)

I loved the last line. "magic" haha. excellent. I'm so glad I picked yours to begin with.

ah! learning, it burns!
it was still funny

That was funny. It reminds me of this guy in my Earth Science class who made this video where Naruto characters talk about sand dunes. I think he put it on Youtube. But I digress. That made me laugh and taught me about physics. I loved the thing at the end.
"Magic."
That was truly hilarious.

That was amazing. And educational. Oh, well, no story's perfect. Just kidding.

Lawl...Hahahahahaha. How did your physics teacher react to the ending? This is the funniest story I've ever read.

That was creative! ^^

oh my gosh this is so awesome! i bet your teacher loved it...it's hilarious and educational at the same time! lol good job! (he better have gave you points for creativity) :)

I had to do a project on Newton's Laws last year...and I still had trouble grasping 'impulse'
Last line was brilliant. I did always wonder...lol XD best line ever!
i did enjoy it. A lot. Thanks a bunch :D

I liked it!
Thanks for the physics lesson... and the magic one! ^_^