 LTAOZFAN 6/12/08 . chapter 1When I read the first line of this poem, I immediately thought of two lines from another poem: "On the fifteenth of May, in the jungle of Noole, In the heat of the day, in the cool of the pool . . . "
Your poem is good, sir, but now you have planted a plot bunny in my mind for a Kim Possible poem in the style of Doctor Seuss. I wonder just what this will grow into?
LTAOZFAN
"Them's my views, amen, so be it."
"Treasure Island," by R. L. Stevenson |
 Danny-171984 6/11/08 . chapter 1Nice...but it kind of reminds me of Green Lantern's chant...I don't know why. Well, keep on writing. |
 Samurai Crunchbird 6/11/08 . chapter 1CaptainKodak1,
Yes, I liked the poem. Its words rang true to the essence of the team.
Was it just a coincidence the phrases in the verse took the shape of a 'Spinning Top of Doom'? I kid because I care.
I wonder what the deal is with all these poems at once. First, it was JA, then KT, now this one. Your mentioned a contest for yours. That still does not explain the others. Maybe it's just another coincidence...
"There's no such thing as a coincidence!" Special Agent Jethro Gibbs, 'NCIS'.
Again, I kid because I care.
Your friend in writing,
The Samurai Crunchbird |
 Sentinel 103 6/10/08 . chapter 1 Less is more! Gee Cap nicely done. Keep up the good work.
Thanks
Sentinel 103 |
 MrNielsen 6/10/08 . chapter 1Your really got essence of Kim and Ron. Great work! Awaiting your next poem with great excitement.
Over and out |
 screaming phoenix 6/10/08 . chapter 1So much said with so few words.
Thanks Captain |
 Star-Eva01 6/10/08 . chapter 1A take on the words spoken by Hal Jordan as he recharged his ring at the power battery.
And it fits so well with how many see Kim and Ron:
Two half's that make one whole.
Team Possible.
Great Work Capt.
Star |
 Mr. Wizard 6/10/08 . chapter 1Nicely done. You do have a knack for poetry. |