Beautiful. Heartbreaking but beautiful. I loved the stream of consciousness style. You used it very well here.

Alex

Interesting way to write it, but it worked perfectly. Nice :D

Oh wow that was bloody awsome! fantastic fic, way to go you!

Wow, that was really really good. I love the way you've written Willow's stream of consciousness. You have her character down really well. I also like how most of it takes place while she's doing laundry. That's a really effective way of showing how her loss affects even the most mundane things. I sound like I'm trying to be all teacher-y and it's gross, but really I was impressed, and I'm trying to explain it. Great work!