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TrulyShadowKissed
2009-12-15 . chapter 21
I just can't wait to read your sequel! I hope Kanda and Allen life a happy happy life. And that Lavi finds someone...
TrulyShadowKissed
2009-12-15 . chapter 19
The suspense! I'm so happy I'm reading this after you've already finished I might've had a heart attack. You're just that good :)
TrulyShadowKissed
2009-12-14 . chapter 9
Oh Allen. How we love you so. Had your heart broken by Kanda and then tortured in you own home? You've been through a lot and I can't wait to see how your story ends. Happy, I hope.
TrulyShadowKissed
2009-12-14 . chapter 5
I feel so bad for Kanda. I know he just ate a baby and everything, but still...
Crimson Affections
2009-12-05 . chapter 21
This. is. too. cool!!
I totally love Kanda as a vampire! And if Kanda didn't turn Allen into a vampire, be it dead or not, I'd drive a stake into his heart! +_+ [or maybe not.]

this is definitely one story i will remember! :D
Crimson Affections
2009-12-05 . chapter 13
OMG! Are they gonna do black magic or something? +_+

I really look forward to this! :D
Crimson Affections
2009-12-04 . chapter 1
Poor Kanda... The first person he hunted was his father..? But he deserved it! Man, Horrible is definitely his father's first name!
Loved this story, just too cool! :D
AliceOfGrey
2009-11-19 . chapter 21
I've always aid: "Never make a sequel to a good movie. Unless the sequel is just as good." but sometimes adding: "But if the original just forking kicks **, sequels are blasphemy."

Haha, forking is totally the alternative! It's like FLE(family and life education) for food-addicts! Or creepy silverware-addicts...

Gawd, I've read just about the whole story, but I don't remember if I had left my reviews for the rest of the chapters!
I had no clue it updates!
Now I feel like an **.

Well, when you continue with the sequel,(assuming I'm not to late for the grand opening) try to make it even better than this one, otherwise the 'no sequel to good movies' rule will apply!

Best of all luck! 8D
allPod
2009-11-01 . chapter 21
Whoa. A sequel? Here I come with my unrightfully critical and extremely judgemental eyes. O.o

First, I'd like to say that I was so sick of Allen's "Please"-this and "S-stop!"-that. PATHETIC OF HIM.

And, the final fight was kinda...idk. Where did it go? lol.

But besides those two points...me likie. This fic was nice. Not extremely well-written, but I'll deal. Your ideas are good...

I'm sure Allen makes a very smexy vampire. Hope he and Kanda make sweet vampsmex to each other every night. Bring the house down.

Lol. Not really. I don't care that much about lemons.
allPod
2009-10-31 . chapter 9
Sigh. OOCness... Weak Allen... It's too easy to overdo it... I mean, it's cute to an extent, but the line is crossed when he starts ** and begging like a teenage prep during her cycle...

I'll forget this chappy ever happened. O.o Cuz I still like the previous chapters.
allPod
2009-10-31 . chapter 6
Okay, I was so ready to just read this whole freakin' story in one breath, but I just had to stop to review this chapter. It was to damn sweet.

Yullen in the sexiest form possible... Kanda...almost overfeeding on poor lil Allen. And, of course, rescuing/getting all possessive. It has awakened my fangirl side... Idk if it'd ever get old... XD

If the rest of this fic remains or exceeds as good as the last few chapters, then I'd most definitely be depressed when it ends...

The one thing that bothers me is your apparent disuse of this lovely tool called the thesaurus. It's an amazing piece of work. Utilize it sometime. lol.

Loved Lavi's "You brought dinner home," btw. Ahaha.

Also liked Tyki and Road's friendliness. Hope they don't turn out evil...it's fine if they do...
HinLove
2009-09-21 . chapter 21
om i read all the chaps in 1 day xD
the epiloge was beautifull (and became xtra special while listening Real (TV Edit)- Dual Adventure )

cant w8 for more!
a1y-puff
2009-09-05 . chapter 21
Ooh, I'm glad that Allen wasn't dead... And I kinda like the current Allen better. Cheeky, a bit flirty, and not weak :D

Glad that it ended well. It was heartbreaking to see Kanda holding Allen's lifeless body.

Thanks so much for sharing! This had been a really enjoyable read ^^
a1y-puff
2009-09-05 . chapter 17
Whoa, I'm so glad that Kanda's back. The last few chaps were intense! And I knew that Lavi was going to help Allen, but I certainly didn't see that last scene coming. So Lavi was doing that under Tyki's order? Arr...

Nice job on Allen. I could feel his fear, his desperation and finally his acceptance to his fate--that he was going to die. And yet he still loved Kanda. Thank God that it brought Kanda back. ^^

Anyway, I'll keep on reading~ *goes off to read more*
aylbro
2009-08-12 . chapter 21
loved it i am so looking forword to the sequel to it
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