|Reviews for growing up|
| mucho gravy-o 12/29/08 . chapter 4
No. I'm sorry, I must agree with the other HONEST reviewers here that this is not at all good. I'm not telling you this to be mean, I'm telling you this so that you can improve. For example...
-The grammar is atrocious.
-THE SPELLING IS TERRIBLE! Use spellcheck! And look out for homophones and words like mistaking 'tong' for 'tongue' because 'tong' is an actual word and spellcheck doesn't fix that for you.
-The most OOC (out of character) fic I've ever read...
-Grimms everafters? o_0 No. Too wierd.
If it's too compicated for you to fix this stuff, which is actually SO easy to fix, I recommend two options for you:
-GET A BETA
or my personal preference
You can't write. That's not a bad thing, and it's certainly not permanent, but it is painfully annoying to the rest of us. Please. Take it down, re-write it if you absolutely MUST to survive. Otherwise, spare us from other eyesores like this.
| Wow 12/28/08 . chapter 1
This story sucks. Like, bad, i mean, BAD! Horrible, horrible, horrible.
| Blue-Eyed-Lily 12/26/08 . chapter 2
Ugh, this is... no, girlfriend, no, this is horrible. I'm talking AWFUL! It's nasty, rushed, out of character, confusing, and just plain bad. Don't hate me for writing that, i'm just stating my opinion, if you can't take a bad comment,(Especially for a story with such bad grammer and spelling.) Don't write any more stories. In my opinion, this is the worst story in the entire Sisters Grimm catagory. Some suggestions if you insist on continuing with writing: Spellcheck everything, Actually try for it to make just a tiny bit of sense, and write it a little more like the characters actually are. otherwise, just stop. please.
| Blue-Eyed-Lily 12/16/08 . chapter 3
It's really rushed and pretty poorly written, it doesn't make much sense. I'm not crazy about it.
| emillythestrange 12/1/08 . chapter 4
wow. i love this chapter. i love it and please update soon!
| puckxsabrina 11/24/08 . chapter 4
Please Continue! Cliffies KIL me! BTW, I came up with a name for PuckxSabrina, and it's P.S. I love you. P being Puck, and S being Sabrina
| Blue-Eyed-Lily 11/23/08 . chapter 4
eh... not the best story on here. not very realistic. but ok.
| You Need This 11/7/08 . chapter 4
Oh my God. No. Just... Just no, honey. This is so wildly out of character (see ch2) and such awful spelling and grammar (it's TONGUE, sweetie, not TONG, among other things) I think my eyes are bleeding. Fix it. Jeez, how do people just let these things go? I'm no perfectionist, but this is ugly.
| The Literature Dragon 11/5/08 . chapter 1
I'm sorry if this is late, I've probably already read your story, if you get this twice because you have more then one story, then I apologize. Anyway, if you haven't already done so, there is now a sisters Grimm community, if you can, please switch your stories to fit the section. Thank you! and you get a free review!
| sabrinagrimmjr 10/6/08 . chapter 4
Wow, That's moving a little fast and and it's a bit strange honestly... I liked it but it was a little weird. I look forward to reading more.
| danawilson 9/6/08 . chapter 4
write more or i will murder you
| The Literature Dragon 8/21/08 . chapter 2
Its good so far, maybe a little rushed, try to update soon! and maybe drag things out a little but it really is pretty good.
| Bleached Rose 8/20/08 . chapter 4
It's ok but just too weird for me
| PIRATEatNIGHT 7/21/08 . chapter 4
i'm so sorry i hate being mean but this isn't the best fic out there. i'll take it sence there arn't enough sisters grimm fics out there but they seem really out of character. i also think they love each other way too fast. u should have streched it out more and sabrina being an everafter is a little weird.
| justanothercrazybrunette 7/20/08 . chapter 1
this is a great story, good job