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moyercat11 2008-08-08 ch 3,	abuseit's good except for a few grammatical errors and chapter 3 is the same as chapter 2 incase you wanted or didnt know. Other that that it's good so far.:)
go-stevie-go 2008-07-24 ch 3,	abuseI like it, i just wish Dick was hurt a little more and there was a lot more drama going on.
XmidnightXcloudX 2008-07-01 ch 1,	abusehelloo... glad you finally got it up. Hey... 101spacemonkey... she has a beta! hi! I've only corrected chapter 3! I'm working on her others with her! ,)
101spacemonkey 2008-07-01 ch 3,	abusewell the layout is definately better, i think you could use a beta, but still i like how this is going. bruce is coming out of shell, but dick might be retreating into his
101spacemonkey 2008-06-22 ch 2,	abusesups? eh? hehe again the layout is messing with my head, however i am enjoying this fic, although i think this chapter is missing something, it feels a bit rushed
101spacemonkey 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseits a bit like reading a script, but the whole pargraphs with all the dialogue squeezed in is a little head wrecking enjoying it none the less
XmidnightXcloudX 2008-06-18 ch 2,	abuseHmm... much better. You're getting good at this. Very well. You are worthy to be on my Fav Authors list. Can't wait until it continues.
Midnight-Flame15 2008-06-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was awesome! Please update soonish! ^,^
Rose of Hope 2008-06-10 ch 1,	abuseNot bad, mate. It has many errors, which can be easily fixed with a beta. The basic plot seems brilliant, but I think laying it out needs a little work. Just a suggestion, take a deep breath and write from the heart, eh? Slow down and give plenty of detail. That's all that this story needs. Also, I think that when you add dialogue, you should serparate it out a bit. Making it easier to read. Just a few suggestions. Other than that, mate, keep it up. Has potential, just give us a bit detail and less side-notes. Keep it up. Deu sa!

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