SQE! I loves it1!

I really enjoyed that story
It was very cute and fluffy
wonderful
It made me smile...
Loved the personalitys you gave them all and the way you set out... it was a wonderful story that i wouldnt mind reading again
~tigeress

awesome story.

This story was so cute! Extremely well written and very creative. Great job!

that was fantastic!
my friend g0tjacki3 told me about this story and told me to read it
so i made my way over here and read it
sorry that i didnt review for each chapter though
i just couldn't wait to get to the next chatper
temari is my favorite naruto character!

I have to say, I loved your plot. And descriptions. Tenmari in fairy form suited her perfectly while the little Shikamaru thoughts about here were so sweet and wasn’t rushed at all. The ending was definitely Shikamaru genius worthy about the philosopher’s stone, a bit confusing but after a few quick read-overs it made sense :D
Your writing style is so fantasy like yet delicate and has a sort of imagery breathtaking thing. Does that make sense? Well on to the sequel!

Once again, I come back to a fic I like only to discover I never reviewed it. *sigh* I'm trying to get better. I liked this a lot, super-cute, and your characterizations of Shika and Tema are some of my favorites. This was a unique way to use them. Excelente!

YAY I LOVE IT!

This is interesting...but i think i like it...ya i do

Interesting story. I really enjoyed it and loved the whole fairytale thing, especially the curse that was put on her. If she grants a wish, she gets closer to dying. If she doesn't, she seals someone else's fate. Poor Temari... =(

And I absolutely loved this description: "...as the sun kissed the earth bowing down to its beauty; the sky blushing red at such an embarrassing display." It paints a very beautiful imagery of sunset.

So, I'm not entirely clear on the extent of the philosopher's stone's powers in this story. Seems like it can do more than just turn any metal to gold. It can grant wishes? Make him younger?

Anyway, thanks for sharing the story! =D

Oh wow. Poor temari, he couldn't say that he really liked her. Oh well... i'm off to the next chapter.

hehe! She blushed! YAY! And she's twitched twice! Down with orochimaru! Go Go Shikamaru!

Oh wow. It was Orochimaru. I wonder what the hell he did! Shikamaru seems seriously pissed. Heehee!

Lol, I like these two, they fit so well together. Nice job with the story so far!^^

Go Go Shikamaru!! Make your village proud! hehe! Makes sense that Shikaku made her smile and now they send Shikamaru for a try.