Hey,

I really like this story, I did think it was a bit of a wasted opportunity that Mutt was already so old by the time he and Indy met - less time to bond! (although, Shia Lebouff was an absolutely perfect Mutt) You should still have it that Mutt dropped out of school (or maybe got kicked out; since hes younger and all?) just because that part was hilarious - that line in the movie was what made em fall in love with it! :)

Your grammar is a little bit off, not enough to throw you off the story but theres room for improvement (There shouldnt be space between the talking marks and the word, commas should be inside the talking marks not out etc.) I would also suggest adding capital letters to your title (Indiana Jones and the Lost City). One last thing; I wouldnt bother with the M rating, i dont think therell be anything that would warrant it and most people dont read M fics because you have to actually request thing and people dont realize that. I would change it to T if i were you... Oh, and as for more review... try changing your settings to accepting anonymous reviews, that should get you more reviews since about half the people who read here dont actually have an account.

Anyway, keep up the good work! I hope to see a new chapter from you really really soon ;)

Amber

I like this twist...enjoying it much.

Thank you both so much for reviewing. Feedback is MUCH appreciated.

Mikazuki Hime- Hehe, thank you. I wanted a chance for Indy to be that father figure that Mutt's been looking for ever since Colin's death.

Bexi-chan - Thank you so much. I appreciate you telling me what I should work on. You're right, I didn't think it was that short/quick when I was writing it. But, I'm so glad that you let me know so that I can work on it...thanks.
:)

This is pretty good actually. I like the fact youve made Mutt younger, yet your sticking to the story's plot carefully.
Something I would say though, is that it'd be worth while to spread things out a bit more, add a little detail, becasue although it doesn't sound that was when your writing it, it's a little fast paced when reading it.
Other than that I think youve got the idea spot on, although I am curious to see why this is an M rated fic, if your doing that as a very carefully precaution (yet theres no actual mature content), Id say take a risk and put it on T (More readers tend not to look at the M fics, youll get more readers and reviewers by lowing the rating (If you feel comfortable doing that of course).
All in all, Im quite enjoying this thus far, and I hope you find this helpful (im in no way flaming what you have done). Update soon please!

This is actually kind of cool. I like the idea of a young Mutt tagging along with Indiana, plus it gives Indy more time to be a father instead of showing up when Mutt is already grown up and ready to leave. Great work!