that was really sad very well written

Beautiful poem! So sad and heartbreaking...Write some more!

"My heart will still be broken

But now all words are spoken."

That was the most heart-wrenching part. It sort of reminds me of the song "If I Can't Love Her" from Beauty and the Beast. This is a truly heartfelt poem and I can feel the sparrabeth inspiration for it. It's not something Jack would ever ever say, but it is most definitely what he would feel. Good job!

Aw That was beautiful! But very sad... I loved this: "My heart will still be broken / But now all words are spoken." I loved how it contrasted with the beginning.

Wonderful poem!

Oh my gosh, I love it! It's sad and beautiful!