|Reviews for Poem of a heartbroken Jack|
| just jacs 10/23/08 . chapter 1
that was really sad very well written
| Addicted to Jack 9/24/08 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem! So sad and heartbreaking...Write some more!
| Willofthewisp 7/27/08 . chapter 1
"My heart will still be broken
But now all words are spoken."
That was the most heart-wrenching part. It sort of reminds me of the song "If I Can't Love Her" from Beauty and the Beast. This is a truly heartfelt poem and I can feel the sparrabeth inspiration for it. It's not something Jack would ever ever say, but it is most definitely what he would feel. Good job!
| Florencia7 6/13/08 . chapter 1
Aw That was beautiful! But very sad... I loved this: "My heart will still be broken / But now all words are spoken." I loved how it contrasted with the beginning.
| ThequeenChrissy 6/11/08 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, I love it! It's sad and beautiful!