this was a great new chapter just wish it wasnt so short lol. i hope you can update soon :)

so we have a fighting rin, ne? and muzan, ugh i already don't like the women...sess is a little graceless? i jsut felt he would have dismissed muzan in a tactful (but none the less rude) way, it was more of an Inuyasha response to me
btw i really hope you don't mind my comments, i am trying to help ^_^'

dude i lost the game! not so sure i like this chapter, the mother seems a bit to pushy and not graceful if you know what i mean.

hehe, i like the sound of this story so far! jaken actually has a heart and misses her, aw ^_^

when next chapter?

please update soon!
love it!
:D

It's awesome can't wait to read the next chapter!

You should update sooner! I forget who the characters are! It's good though, so I'll keep reading!

oh nu!! why would anyone want to kill children?! anywho please update soon. arrigato!

wow your story is really amazing!
How do you get all the great ideas? ^^
Please update soon, I can't wait ;)

Your story is really good! This is my first time reading it and I am very interested to see how it turnes out! I really hope you finish it =) Two thumbs up!

wow talk about a long wait..its ok im far from angry lol im just glad you updated.. o that muzan what an evil ** u know its one thing to punish a child but to kill one out of spit is just down right evil i hope sesshomaru comes and kills her ugh deserves it selfish wench and when is rin gonna escspe it seems as though she made a loyal enough friend to do so ...or maybe im just hopin for immediate sessh/rin lol but anyway update soon can't wait


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PLEASE PLEASE IT HAS BEEN TWO MOUNT'S ALREADY PLEAS UPDATE SOON

FINALLY! YAY YOU UPDATED! LIKE IT! I'M SEEING A KINDER SESS!YAY! NISHI IS SO CUTE! POOR RIN THOUGH!PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING K!

Interesting plot, is Nishi Sesshomaru's? We did not really get when Rin was left at the village so it could have been. I like Sesshomaru's reaction to Nishi and how evil Muzan is. Please update soon!