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| FoShizzleLikeWhoa 2008-09-30 ch 1, | abuseProlly the most touching story I have EVER read. GOODJOB. \:D/ |
| Sapphire GrapeVine 2008-09-26 ch 20, | abuseYou are amazing. It's just so BRILLIANT, your writing. I swear, if I had one wish, I would wish to have the talent to write like you can...Or maybe I'd wish for a few more wishes so I could wish for world peace and cupcakes, too. But that's not the point. I'm getting off track. Anyway, PLEASE write more! And if you get the chance, actually WRITE and PUBLISH books! People would SO buy them! -Sapphy |
| TheWholeWorldsWhore 2008-09-07 ch 20, | abuseFirst off, I want to say how much I absolutely loved this story! I usually don't like the whole Sam X Freddie paring (despite my hatred for the obvious pairings, I do find myself a lover of Carly X Freddie parings when it comes to iCarly), so when I clicked on the link for the story, I had done it thinking that it was a Creddie fic. I was so into it when I first started reading it, that even when I realized the pairing (a pairing which I personally dislike), i couldn't stop reading it despite myself. I fact, I stayed up all night so I could finish the story. So, oober big high five to you for making me absolutely love the pairing, especially since I'm the type of person who hates going outside of their comfortzone when it comes to pairings and stories. Second, I absolutely love your style of writing. It is so beautifully written and heartwrenching. I'm not one to cry over a story, but I seriously teared up like 5 times in the duration of 6 or 7 chapters. Expecially when Sam's mom was consoling her the day before she was suppose to leave again! I cried bundles of tears! And I the way it was all written, I could actually somewhat feel her pain. Which is amazing. Lastly, I just want to say that I think the story was pure genius. The plot was perfect. The twists were very well-written. And I don't get to type this often, but it really was a pleasure to read your story. I just got into iCarly fanfiction and this story was one of the first few I've read and I have to say, reading your fic only strengthens my willingness to read more iCarly fiction. So, thank you. -TripleW |
| CrayonsAndSunlight 2008-09-02 ch 20, | abuseI think it's pretty suckish that this has ended. I blame the Skunkbag Valerie. Alright, no. I suppose I'll forgive her. But really, I wish this story could continue on forever. Right now, I miss the suspense that came with reading an unfinished story. Ha, I sound like Sam! This story was, and is, wonderfully amazing. I think it's lovely to see the other side of Hollywood, but also seeing a happy ending. You do your job well. |
| MoochyAteMySoxs 2008-08-29 ch 20, | abuseAH!! *runs around like a headless chicken* I CAN'T BELIEVE I'VE NEVER READ THIS BEFORE NOW! ITS TOTALLY AND COMPLETELY AMAZING! IT WAS LIKE I WAS READING A NOVEL! BUT ABOUT ON OF MY FAVORITE SHIPS EVER!! *takes off CAPS* that was reeally awesome. this would make an awesome movie! haha KEEP WRITING AMAZING STORIES! -moochy :D |
| Her Name Is Erika 2008-08-25 ch 20, | abuseI can't even start to describe how freaking awesome this story was. I was so suckered into this - you have no idea. I was on Jennette McCurdy's website and so close to sending her the link to this story, so she herself could see how someone portrayed her character beautifully if she ever got around to replying her "frans" (friends and fans as she calls them). I had an explanation & everything. And then my laptop decided that the battery wasn't enough. I had to shut it down before it died on me. Luckily, I love my computer enough to pull a Sam Puckett move and throw it out the window. But seriously, applaud yourself, Colors. You know I've been with you ever since you wrote "Deal" way back in the summer of '06. It's great to watch you evolve. I can say I was one of those people from the beginning, and I'm proud of that. Oh, and I got your PM. I think the reason you're having trouble with Quinn's POV is because you've been away from the Zoey 101 circuit, so I think you have been get re-aquianted with the characters again...know what I mean? But I know you can pull it off, but if it's hard, write in third person. Oh, God. Quinn in Lewbert's lobby? HAHAHA! That's like imagining Sam stealing Coco's ravioli and eating it right in front of her! LOL! Coco and Sam share something in commom - no one messes with their food and they're always hungry. That would be a funny thing to picture, but I think when Quinn sees Lewbert's wart, she'll be intrigued and grossed out at the same time. Quinn (whispering to Freddie): Oh my God. You were right, it IS huge. Imagine the chemical composition of fluid in that once it pops? Freddie (grossed out): I think I'll just let Sam eat my snack. It's easier than watching her actually steal it when I'm standing right there. Ha! Nice Freddie/Quinn introduction scene for you if it helps. I can also imagine a funny Spencer/Quinn moment when Spencer makes one of his rockin' scupltures =) Ooh, there could also be a part where Sam actually thinks Quinn is cool and she goes to Quinn, "You're smart, so why are you related to him?" or something along those lines. I'll be happy to spit out ideas for you. But seriously, if only the cast of iCarly read this... Okay. Freaking amazing story. -Erika |
| LilyJackson 2008-08-24 ch 20, | abuseI love this story. It was so good. |
| Stl Carly fan 2008-08-24 ch 1, | abuseReally really good story! Sad, as well! Very very very glad it has a happy ending! I would really hate to see anything bad happen to any character from the show! I don't think I've had as many tears go down my face since the frist time I saw the movie "Lost and Delirious"!! Thank you for a good experience and seeing the characters in a different light than they usually are!! |
| save-the-dinos13-BATZILLA 2008-08-23 ch 20, | abuseOMJ it rocked.. i sa w it on youtube.. wow im glad i read it .. i was AWESOMEOO |
| BeautifulxxDisasterx 2008-08-21 ch 20, | abuseI have never before read a better ending to a story. Never. That was...that was amazingly flawless. I loved the way you wrapped this up. You didn't leave any loose ends, you didn't let anything fall through. It was effortless. You seriously ended it on a note in which everything fell into place. Every detail that we had wondered about was included. You ended it in a way that was truly what the story was all about. It was a true epilogue, which I find that a lot of writers don't know the meaning of. An epilogue wraps things up. It's what happens way after, not the day after. It is a complete ending to the story, not an opening for a sequel, and I'm glad you understand that. "I think you can remember what happens next." Okay, seriously?! JEALOUS=ME. If you didn't already know that you are a genius, that right there should show you. You should be VERY proud of the way you ended it, like that last line. It came down to what the story is all about, which is not forgetting about yourself and all that stuff that I've already said about a thousand times in my long reviews. Sam is trying to make things work, and things ARE falling back into place with her. She's settling back into the way she needs things to be, she's finding her place in the world again. Sam is Sam now, and things are working out that way. You showed that wonderfully, especially in that ending line. Every single thing in this story was flawless. If it were up to me, it would just go on FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER, but I guess all amazingly awesome things must come to an end, and my goodness it shouldn't have ended any other way. It was FANTASTICAL. Colors, this was perfect, and I simply cannot wait to see what other stories you have up your sleeve. -Lani |
| BeautifulxxDisasterx 2008-08-21 ch 19, | abuseAH! SECOND TO LAST CHAPTER! WHAT? okay. I'm alright now. But really? That's not even cool! And I am SO not cool for taking THIS long to review. I feel really bad. So, I shall leave an extremely long review in return. Hopefully, it'll be worth it. >< OH MY GOSH. This chapter was freaking amazing. I am amazed at how well you have continued this whole process, how well you have created this in depth story that is not at all just a bunch of words thrown together to entertain people. This story means something. It makes the readers feel more then just what's on the surface. You never once faltered, never once had something that didn't make sense. There wasn't a single chapter that I didn't find to be inspiring and wonderful, not a single chapter that didn't mean something. Each and every one was this web of precise movements and revelations. It held such amazing-ness that I can't even being to describe. There's just so much more to it then what was on the surface, and me saying all of this doesn't even being to scratch what was held in this story. I can't tell you enough how amazing your characters were. I simply cannot. Nothing came too soon, nothing came too late. Every action, every word, every move they made was simply brilliant, placed in the right spot at the right time. You paid attention to who THEY were instead of who YOU wanted them to be. You let their own processes overcome them to create these characters that were dynamic and changing. It takes a lot to make a good dynamic character, and you did it. You did it 4 times, with 4 different characters. You are utterly amazingly brilliant dear. If only my words could put that across better. I sit here TRYING to find the words to tell you how terrific that was, and yet I can't. I hate that! Gah. Basically, THAT WAS AMAZING. Only multiply that by like, infinity, and you've got those characters. Seriously. Yeah. I loved that, if you couldn't already tell... I must go read the epilogue now. *cry* -Lani |
| shoopshoopforshiz 2008-08-20 ch 20, | abusebest ending ever...like ever. that's all i'm gonna say...i'm just sad that it's over. -shoopshoop |
| Lol ItsLoliver 2008-08-18 ch 20, | abuseThis was a really great story! :) i loved it. i was like OMJ since i thought that they wouldn't say anything to each other but u gave me loads of seddie love! i'm so adding u 2 my fave lol. bye |
| welcome to maddieland 2008-08-17 ch 20, | abuseGoodness. That was a very long, very awesome, very everything-I'd-hoped-for ending to this story I came across by chance :) I love Freddie and Sam's fight-flirting. So cute! Anyway, amazing story. I'm sad to see it end. :( |
| it'skellyduhh 2008-08-17 ch 20, | abuseawwh i loved it, |