Cute and adorable. I MUST say I'm starting to like Oshley and Lake more, solely because of you!

I really don't know what I was expecting when I clicked on this, but I HAD to click on it. It was definitely something. I like how you wrote it. It's not some sudden terribly romantic thing, that's good. You're always writing good things.

Kelly

-Oliver's lips suddenly attacked her own, and to be honest, she didn't feel the need to push him away.-

you make kissing sound so violent...lol. Oliver's lips ATTACKED her own...it's funny how some people say things like that.

_ lips crashed into _ lips.

Stuff like that makes me laugh...I don't know why

I decided I was going to review your least-reviewed story, because it makes me feel better when that happens to me. Of course, now I have to review all of the stories with four reviews because they're tied for least reviews...

Anyway! I think this turned out pretty well for such a spontaneous pairing. I think Oshley might work out, especially if you went back to elementary school. Then that gets rid of the popularity hurdle, which makes for a happier, but more boring relationship. And was Oliver really a fourth of Ashley's status? On that list thing, Ashley was probably two (Amber being one), and Oliver said he was on the first page. Maybe just half her status. I get what the point was, though. I thought this worked out well. Next time you want to do a random pairing, post it. They're really fun to read. Good luck writing!

Amber

Oshley... i like the sound of it. ;) great fic. it was in character-ish and i loved when Oliver "attaked Ashley with his lips". great fic and it was kinda weird, but it a good way. :)

xoxo, Britt.

Hell yeah, Katie! Show 'em what the crack is made of!

Cough. Okay, okay. I'm good. Calm.

I think I'm a little hyper after watching more of Avatar's third season. Sokka, sigh. Doesn't help that we also watched Black Cat (anime). Black Cat is so darn cute.

You have inspired me to write an Oshley, too (admittedly, it ISN'T your best work). I'll try. probably fail, but I will try.

I love how you worked in the 'kaa-san' thing. (On another note, if she was close enough to her mother to call her 'kaa-san' instead of 'okaa-san', then she probably could've said 'kaa-chan', but whatever.)

Isn't it hard to write a crack pairing and still keep the peepz in character? OOC is possibly overused.

Haha that was awesome! They're such opposites that it makes an awesome pairing. Terrific job!