 slytherinlion.o9 2009-03-17 . chapter 1wow... |
 halbarath 2008-06-14 . chapter 1Lovely. Written with much sensitivity. It reads tenderness. Does that make sense for you? |
 silveredges 2008-06-12 . chapter 1short sweet and simple |
 m4severus 2008-06-11 . chapter 1It's beautiful, but this is no surprise with you as the author.
Do you have any lengthy HG/SS fic in your plans (hint, hint :)) ? |
 duj 2008-06-10 . chapter 1Was she planning to stay until her own house was hit? Or perhaps it was her they were searching for? |
 notwritten 2008-06-10 . chapter 1Very interesting, and cool chapter today. Have a swell day tomorrow. Keep smiling every day. :-) |
 omateido 2008-06-10 . chapter 1This was unexpected and powerful. Good job |
 creative-writing-girl13 2008-06-10 . chapter 1AW that was sweet! But i am confused...were Death Eaters attacking her street? Write more really soon you area really good! |