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Seven Tenths
2009-11-18 . chapter 19
This is a good fic, I love it, but if you keep trashing KnM I'm morally obligated to assasinate you.
xobbyluffxo
2009-07-14 . chapter 19
Uh...I really don't know what to say to this o-o
It was...interesting. Very very interesting.
tygeryoyo
2009-02-01 . chapter 19
This was an interesting story - not in a bad way. The writing was great and was neither too descriptive nor out-of-taste either. I understand where you're coming from about your criticisms of the manga and anime because I agree with you (pointless robots, useless characters, poorly written, etc.) , but yeah, it is great shoujo-ai and that's the only redeeming part. Thanks for writing this story and providing an ending that is not entirely hopeful and fluffy and a formula that is just different. =)
Foxpassed
2008-11-29 . chapter 19
Disturbing. It is actually very well written, but I find the characters hard to relate to as they don't have any redeeming qualities at all. I actually wished they had just both perished in some cataclysmic explosion dragging down the wretched king with them than living a pathetic excuse of a life under a government that looks upon them like maggots. I believe that the extent of love varies proportionally to the character of a person, and that has to be established first before someone goes around professing undying love to anyone. If your goal was to portray how one-dimensional and stupid Chikane and Himeko were in canon, you have without a doubt succeeded. Only, you might have gone a tad overboard. Their 'loserness' in this fic made me feel worthless and pathetic in their stead. T_T
Roselia Rose
2008-11-27 . chapter 19
Oh I do quite agree with your opinion on the anime but I adore the couple immensely. I enjoyed your story and you had all the characters in their own unique personalities for the majority of the time. The blending of Bleach and KnM was very original. The ending was bittersweet but you showed that not everything good has to have a perfect ending.
TwlightDevil-of-the-Night
2008-09-24 . chapter 19
I thought this was a great story
A good angst story
And you dislike it
And you wrote it
I'm a little confuse
Kiros Razer
2008-09-23 . chapter 19
I loved this fic.
ragnarox dragoon
2008-09-22 . chapter 19
Dude if there was ever going to be a sequel to Kannazuki no Miko I think that Priestesses unchained would be the best damn story line they could follow.
I've read both Priestesses unchained and My sister and I.
I think there some of the best out there, at least they do leave you hanging at the end of ** rope like some other KnM stories I've read. I really think that the writers of KnM should talk to Tsuyazakura Kouyuki. Who knows, maybe they'll make a sequel.
Any way it was a good story on a scale of 1 to 10 I give it 7.5

thanks.
Rorento-san
2008-09-21 . chapter 19
After reading your noTE I finally understand why EVERYTHING IS CRAP EVEN THE ENDING IS STILL PAINFUL AND ITS ALL BECAUSE YOU HATE KNM MANGA? SPITEFUL LITTLE PERSON AREN'T YOU? You're RIGHT YOU SHOULD MOVE ON TO OTHER STUFF AND NOT WRITE KNM FIC IF ALL YOU'RE DOING IS BASHING THE LOVELY GIRLS IN IT.
Linnara
2008-09-21 . chapter 19
So it ended, huh? They really lost everything in their kingdom, but they still have each other and were even able to go for a marriage. I think that is all both of them will ever need, so I consider it a happy end. ^^

I have to thank you for sharing this great story with us. You did a great job with your fic, thank you very much! :-)
Linnara
2008-09-21 . chapter 18
So that is Kazukis story... well, you are right, a traitor is only a traitor when he chose to be on the wrong side. His past is somewhat sad. At least he still likes Himeko (Honestly, who but Orochi does not? ^^).

And regarding Souma, I think Orochi will consume him entirely. Poor boy, he will end like his 'brother' for sure.
Linnara
2008-09-21 . chapter 17
So Himeko sold the whole kingdom in order to survive... well, if you and your dearest one is dead, the freedom of the kingdom would be obsolete anyway.

So she made the deal... and the Orochi could have been defeated, too, if there was not Souma. Well, even with the power of Orochi he won't overcome the Spaniard military.

And Kazuki being a traitor of the Spaniards? I didn't expect that. :)

Nice done. ;-)
Spikesagitta
2008-09-20 . chapter 19
lol, the mecha could be edited out, but i like the shoujo ai in it :) so there^^
Spikesagitta
2008-09-20 . chapter 18
...very nice, very nice words...though he is a tragic character..i cant help but feel that he deserve to be pity...
Spikesagitta
2008-09-20 . chapter 15
what happen next?! *hurry turn to the next chapter*
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