That little TBC made me happy. One-shots just aren't enough sometimes.

Cute! Please continue!

MOAR

WRITE MOAR

Sound good. I all was like The Merchant. So this story is same thing I will look out for.

Good job strangah!


Plese keep going!

Nice! I like it so far. You're storytelling is good, and I think your decision to make Leon an ass in this makes it easier for the Ashlye/Merchant relationship to go on. Overall, very nice!

Definitely an intriguing concept. I'm looking forward to future chapters.

Certainly an original pairing, and the initial chapter's good. I'd like to see how this goes.

intresting pairing and good fic

bye:)