I need an update!! Love reading the story.

Another awesome chapter! ^_^ I like how you are developing snake in your story, by informing the readers about his painful past. Considering I've never played Metal Gear Solid, it's quite helpful to get to know him better as to who he is as a person. Loved the part with him getting hit by lighting by Pikachu, that was really funny! ^_^ Anyway, update soon, can't for the next chapter!

I REALLY like what you've done thus far. This is easily one of the best fics I've found in the SSB section, and as a Snakus fan I'm looking forward to the two of them meeting. But more than that, you've really taken great care with presenting Snake's back story, giving those of us who don't know him well a strong sense of who he is and what he's seen. Major props, and I hope you update soon!

Your story is going great so far. It also makes me want to play my Twin Snakes again, though if I really wanted I could pull out my dreamcast anytime. You're doing a pretty damn good job with the character as well.

I think I really am liking this story, and also that it's been less than a Month since you last updated.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Mercenaries are complicated. It's very rarely a line of work one chooses to enter. You more or less drift to it.

Gah, I think I may love you for writing this! There's just so many great things to say about this fanfic. :) You've truly created an original story here- the plot is not only interesting but poignant, and you really captured Snake's complex character. I am *loving* this so far and can't wait for the next chapter. :)

You're still doing good, don't worry! *winks* It's another great chapter. (You're finally gonna get started on the pairing in the next chapter...Thank God! Just Kidding, I can wait...)

Nice!


Please continue!

interesting chapter to say thee least. yee grammer seems to have improved aswell youngone.

Though remember character development is just as important as a plot, discription of atmoshere is also key.

thy await thee winds for yee next installment, keep going.

This is really good I dont know all that much about MGS but I got really interested I really like it I cant wait for what happens next

Well, well, well... It looks like I've got a rival today for claiming the top spot of the Super Smash Brothers Romance section now, hm? :P Damn you, Chief. You ruin my moments of glory when it comes to updating our fan fics.

Anyway, great explanations of what's going on in the Super Smash Brothers world. I really like the fact that you've dived into Snake's character. You seem to really stick with it (just judging from the whole Codec messages from Brawl) throughout the chapter.

I'm really surprised to see how friendly you've made Link. For some reason, Twilight Princess Link never came across as that friendly too me, but whatever. I guess I can see Link being that friendly in... a very light hearted way.

But ahahahaha, Snake and Pikachu. Hilarious. I thought Pikachu would enjoy the petting though. But whatever. Still funny, I love the fact that Pikachu shocked Snake.

I'm really pleased to see how well you've shaped this, dude. Anyway, update when you can. You're on a roll, man!

-BKP

nice. make more chappays, pleaze.

This fic looks promising, I'll be reviewing every chapter from here on out.

The faithful reviewer,

Captain Deadpool

Another wicked awesome chapter. (You really get Snake's personality right. Hurray for MGS fans!) You're writing skills are very good.