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thoughtful illusion
2008-10-07
ch 48,
abuseFirst off, I love reading this series, all of you authors are quite clever and I've really enjoyed the different points of views. You've all done a great job of keeping the voices authentic.

Second (and I don't know that anyone cares) but I recently attended a local fair, where I discovered an alternative (or perhaps just older) origin of the term 'honeymoon.' You see there was a beekeeping/honeymaking area at this fair and I happened to notice a sign that explained this term. Apparently, relatives (if I remember correctly) of the bride and groom traditionally would give them enough mead to last them a month. Thus honey--mead being a 'honeywine'--moon--referring to the month supply. Must've been a pretty festive month heh ^.^
Mini Librarian
2008-10-07
ch 49,
abuseLinda is a manipulative little witch isn't she?
DethRose
2008-10-07
ch 49,
abuseOMG! I LOVE THIS...AMAZING! (I hope I spelled that right.) A week out of school would do that to you. Anyway. Keep on keeping on...as the old saying goes. GROOVY! Don't stop! I love it. Thank you. Sorry I forgot to take my medicine. ;)
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nothing but a dreamer
2008-10-07
ch 4,
abuselol this is adorable and hilarious
yshtabi
2008-10-06
ch 48,
abuseat last! I get some J/S! Aww, poor Jareth, being attacked by hordes of lascivious women :D I bet he exaggerates a lot, just to get more kisses from Sarah.
notwritten
2008-10-06
ch 49,
abuseThat was an interesting chapter to read. Thank you for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)
yshtabi
2008-10-05
ch 47,
abuseand once again, main characters are completely blanketed. Of course, Troink is amusing while Hoggle not so much, but what is the point of this chapter? Jareth proposed to Sarah in front of her parents, but who cares, because Ludo is a proud father of thirteen and can actually communicate!
I miss main characters.
yshtabi
2008-10-05
ch 46,
abusethank goodness Toby is grounded, not that I do not love his enthusiastic emails, but I want more Jareth and Sarah.
I have high hopes all talk about 'cooties' will end too.
Maybe if I've read a chapter immediately after updating, this 'cooties' matter would not be so ... well, annoying as it seems after reading several chapters in a row.
Quillerella
2008-10-04
ch 49,
abuseYay! Thank you for updating! Absolutely loved this chapter too, and I am so relieved that Sarah is all right. I actually had a bit of a fear that something more sinister was going on, like Chenea was going to capture her or something.

Can't wait until the wedding!

Great job! :D
Eclectic Me
2008-10-03
ch 49,
abuseOh my, this last update took me by surprise! I mean, here I was, reading the last chapter, 48. So I finish reading 48, and I guess I must have been on autopilot or something, (I was up all night, for two nights in a row reading this dang thing, and I can barely type now as it is!), and I just clicked the next chapter button, only realizing afterward that that button shouldn't have been there, and there were 5 new reviews. Anyway, enough of my babbling.
Oh my gosh, there are so many good things to say about this story! It's a shame that I usually am not the type to review each chapter of a story; it would be so much easier if I did! Anyway, let me start by saying that this is just so much fun to read! The format makes it seem like either a roleplay or a blog, both of which I love to peruse! Despite the non-story format, it's extremely well-done! Heck, even most of the times when you made mistakes, whether intentional or not, I felt like it was the characters making them! It's so nice to see the little day-to-day interactions and happenings of the characters! Infact, now that the plot has a bit more of a definate direction, in other words is a bit thicker, it may be different, but at one point, I didn't think it would work as a traditional story. It would almost definately be shorter, and would probably be less interesting! I love the way each of the character's e-mailing style is shown so well, particularly earlier on. You have the aragant and semi-formal goblin king, the creatively speech patterned goblin Troink, the average, (as if!), young woman Sarah, ETC. Also, they different ways Sarah interacts with different characters is perfect. Bethany is so sweet! The first conversation between Sarah and Jarith was great! Senior discount at Denny's? Lol!
I feel sorry for every one of them at the moment, but I love seeing Sarah and Jarith in love! Even though I'm not usually much for romance fanfictions, these two make such a romantic couple in this particular story! I can only hope that somehow, they will be able to return to where they truly belong someday.
The days and dates are still a bit off in some chapters, but I know you are working on that gradually.
Poor Hoggle and Didymus! They, along with Ludo have always been my favorite characters.
Oh well, I can't wait to see what happens from here!
Bratney
2008-10-03
ch 49,
abuseAnd here I was hoping she was feeling better, poor Danika! Thanks for posting again, I was starting to feel lost and confused. :D
Dragonzair
2008-10-03
ch 49,
abuseNGAH! A great way to start the weekend! :3

LMAO. Rob's started calling Sue, Suzie-Q?! Rob still slightly irks me, but...he seems genuinely interested in Sue, so I hope things turn out all right for the. :3

OH, HOLY SHOOT! Linda's sick!? No! Jareth's gonna be all alone? D: Still, though. XD I wonder how Karen'll react to Jareth referring to Sarah as 'my Sarah'.

WTF. Valarie spying on Jareth. Tsk.

Oy, does no one like Rel? :(

"Tell Marcus to shut his yap (I have been picking up slang from the ladies who frequent the store.) and leave you alone."

Lol, Jareth.

Oh, Holy FARK. Linda, you bastard of a woman. GAH. I can't help but give a HUGE laugh at what KIND of surgery she's having. My gosh. Linda you idiot. XD Anyhow. I hope Linda doesn't come to the wedding.

LMAO. Jareth doesn't know what a nose-job is! PUAHAHAHAH.

"You gave Marshel free reign in the kitchen? Great Chaos- can you still fit through the door??"

Damn you people! I almost died from laughing at this point! HAHAHHA. That's my favourite line in this chapter. HAHA.

Oh...Jareth had a slip-up about 'his' goblins. How cute :3 He really cares about them.

Draconis: Heehe. I want him in a fic, now. XD And Rel, of course. But that was a given.

I hope Dani gets better from her mental breakdown (though a hula dance sounds funny). See you guys soon :3
futrCSI1490
2008-10-03
ch 49,
abuseOh dear, well we can't very well have Danika doing that now can we... I hope she is alright! :/

Lovely chapter. OMG stupid LINDA! What the hell is her problem!? Selfish bea-otch!! Gr... >:O

Aww, poor Jareth must be going insane... no Sarah :(. It will be over soon!

Great as always!! Can't wait for more! :)

Update soon! :D
Anij
2008-10-03
ch 49, anon.
abuse"your boo-boo" - okay, Rob needs to quit saying that. He's a grown man and it's just... creepy.

Not that "mumsie" isn't, it's just... different.

Oh...sounds like those birdwatchers don't belong to anybody. Especially if Rob's got one. So who's sending the spies?
CoffeeKris
2008-10-03
ch 49,
abuseGood editing Marti! Danika started doing a hula dance on her desk,at work, in her underwear? Awsome! Danika, you are so my hero!
Jareth and Sarah are so mushy lovey dovey :P :D
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