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| bisounours 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abusehey. :) it's kat from post bellum. i ran across this, and realised that i knew you! this is such a sweet story. i really liked the idea of using one line to express an entire theme - it isn't very easy to do, but you've certainly done it right. i'd never really considered neville/lavender before (oddly enough) but this is enough to make me wonder why it wasn't in the books. |
| Vega Black62 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was a lot of fun. I liked your Neville and Lavender realtionship. Some of these tell a whole story in one sentence. Some feel more like themes for a story. Some are a an introduction to a story I would like to read. But I enjoyed them all. |