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bisounours
2008-07-22
ch 1,
abusehey. :) it's kat from post bellum. i ran across this, and realised that i knew you!

this is such a sweet story.
i really liked the idea of using one line to express an entire theme - it isn't very easy to do, but you've certainly done it right.

i'd never really considered neville/lavender before (oddly enough) but this is enough to make me wonder why it wasn't in the books.
Vega Black62
2008-06-11
ch 1,
abuseThis was a lot of fun. I liked your Neville and Lavender realtionship. Some of these tell a whole story in one sentence. Some feel more like themes for a story. Some are a an introduction to a story I would like to read. But I enjoyed them all.
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