Let's take a look see and...

wow...over a year...

Is life really getting you down?

It's an interesting concept, though the execution seems kind of forced. I can accept Naruto's reason for going to Konoha (Turning in a bounty) as well as the reason for showing up in Wave, however, a lot of it doesn't really make sense, such as the Leaf-nin's acceptance of Naruto into the party(He could easily have just camped out and went after a weakened Zabuza), Kakashi offering to train Naruto, Naruto taking orders from Kakashi despite the fact that Naruto isn't a ninja at all. Plus the fact that the revised squad 7 is lacking a member.

Even if this is an adopted fic, you can change things for the better and clearing up some of the plot holes would make it a better fic all around. Sorry if I'm sounding mean, but I'm just trying to be helpful.

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Thozmp Corris

I was mildly pleased with the orignal, but after having read your rendition of it I can say i'm now rather fond of it. I really like the expansions that you have made to the story they clear up alot of the oversites of the original and add a nice bit of orignality as well. I look forword to seeing how you continue to modify this story.

When are you going to update?

if you decide to stop updating this for two years as well you will soon find yourself dead.

Great story.

Will you give info on Naruto,s Spider-silk Themed jutsu?

Please update soon. I loved this story when Nezumimaru was writing it! I wanna see it progress!

update this please

Well now its been what almost two years since I've seen you update or anything for that matter and here I fround out that you adopted this fic that I've been reading on and off for the last three weeks.

But I have to say that in retrospect that Nezumimaru really would be hard pressed to find someone better and I'm looking forword to seeing what you do with this and you've been doing a good job with it so far and the addtion of the spinnerets in to Naruto's arms and legs was a great idea.

Now I have a question will you keep the pairing only Naruto x Ino or will you add more to it, and what kind of things would you use Zabuza's sword for anyway?

O well its good to see you back and I'll be looking forword to reading what you write next for this, latter.

heres a quetion for ya?
what happens when naruto comes across kidumaru?
will they fight? or
will they make peace?

in the anime and manga kidumaru seem's to have a summoning contract for spiders, will naruto get a hold of it?
(i've always liked strange or orriginal summon's)

will naruto stay in leaf or rebuild mist?

and last but not least does naruto have any conection to the forth hokague at all?

update soon

You have taken a story that I thought was great and made it greater!

very good

hey hey! Okay... I apologize for not reviewing since the first chapter, but the way you edited this story around had turned it into quite the riveting story. I read the previous version as well, and am glad you picked up this story. If it was good before, then it turned awesome! Ha ha.

You've definitely developed Naruto more here... although it would have been nice if you had edited the previous authors' notes a bit more... and maybe developed more... insights or dialogue... like how Naruto was censoring his more "serious" hobbies.

Oh, and that bandage guy was Ibiki, huh?

Anyway, I can't wait to read more and see where you're going to take us. I am especially looking forward to the first Chunin Exam chapter...

Great job update soon.

Great story.

Hope you give info on Spider-themed jutsu.

Update soon.