 CaramelDucky 2008-10-16 . chapter 2aw i liked it. :3 i wanna see some sasuhina actioan :D ^^ update soonah (soon) |
 DimLight 2008-09-06 . chapter 2oo~ are the flowers like for a grave or something? Real interesting. I hope you'll continue to update. ^__^ |
 ryomaeijiarehot 2008-08-09 . chapter 2I like your style of writing. Very nice description. Update soon please!
Love ya - Yuki |
 Hidden Shadow Love 2008-07-21 . chapter 2This is my second favorite pairing! So far, this story is great. But, Sasuke buying flowers? Really, that's an actually funny site!
Great work! |
 eeeepppp 2008-07-21 . chapter 2 upadate!upadate!upadate!upadate!upadate!upadate!upadate!upadate! |
 Vampiress22 2008-06-16 . chapter 2This is so great. I think you wrote "choir" instead of chore once, but that's no big deal. I make a million mistakes all the time, so it doesn't matter. I love the description once again.
Update soon, I want to know what is going to happen! |
 Vampiress22 2008-06-16 . chapter 1That was a great chapter, and I really love this fanfic. I love how your description and your word choice. It really adds a positive effect to the story. I need to keep reading! |
 lightxdark 2008-06-16 . chapter 2>_< You spelled 'chore' wrong like twice in there. You put 'choir' instead...^_^ Good chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. |
 Bitter-Blood-Sacrifice 2008-06-15 . chapter 2I really liked this story and i hope you update soon good work. |
 pcttgirl23 2008-06-15 . chapter 2I like it! Update! |
 HelloJulia 2008-06-15 . chapter 2Heheheh, nice ending :D. Oh yeha I found a typo (I think) isn't 'choir' supposed to be 'chore'? This chapter was great, can't wait for Chapter 3
-Julia |
 HelloJulia 2008-06-15 . chapter 1Yup reluctancey is a word! I google'd it, thus, adding more proof that spell check is an idiot in many ways xD. I like the fiction so far, because it seems in sync to what the character's would really do (except I have no idea why Sasuke would go into Ino's flower shop, plot support?). I thought you Hiashi was pretty IC, and I guess Kimoto wanted him to be a hard-to-write-without-him-being-OOC character (probably to irk fanfiction writers xD). Off to the second chapter!
-Julia
Ps: Nope I didn't spy any typos |
 Beginning 2008-06-15 . chapter 2Sasuke sure likes flowers lol |
 Beginning 2008-06-13 . chapter 1...yeah why did Sasuke buy a flower! Is it for Hinata cause he has a crush on her? |
 destiniesrose 2008-06-13 . chapter 1i like it i want more and BIG THANKS for not taking hinata out of character |