|Reviews for Thunderstorms|
| a thousand cranes 4/10/09 . chapter 1
Boys Like Girls- Up Against the Wall
That's the song I would use for this piece.
"feeling their warmth heal the jagged edges of the wounds my shattered broken pieces had created." was the part that echoed over and over again in my head... It reminded me of a saying i read somewhere on ffn, to be careful when you pick up the pieces because they're sharp.
The ending... maybe it would sound better if you take out the last sentence. yeah, if you leave it at "...as the rain slowed to a halt." it sounds better if you end it there.
| i-x3-shikamaru 7/19/08 . chapter 1
omg i love it!
| oni-hime-san 6/11/08 . chapter 1
that was sad. honest, and i lov the uae of thunderstorms in this
| haliz 6/11/08 . chapter 1
ohh poor sakura, she should walk away from them
they always leave her behind
it is good and sad and mostly good hehe
make a sequel please