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TheManiacOnWheels
2008-08-05 . chapter 8
Sad but good chapter. Poor Cecil...
Draganta the Dragonlord
2008-08-03 . chapter 8
It's just like when Devilseer killed Aiden. This chapter has made me sad right now. Please keep it going with this touching story.
Draganta the Dragonlord
2008-07-26 . chapter 7
The chapter was too cute. A hatchlings version of "chase". Seriously, well done. Keep up the interesting works as always.
Omega 445
2008-07-25 . chapter 7
great new chapter, this is one of my favs, keep it up, P.S make the chaps longer
TMHB77
2008-07-10 . chapter 6
great as usual, hope to see more!
Draganta the Dragonlord
2008-07-10 . chapter 6
My hearts was beating quite fast with this chapter. I thought at least one of them was a goner. Very, very well done with this chapter and keep up the interesting work that you do.
TMHB77
2008-06-30 . chapter 5
ha! funny apple related standoff. and the way they talk is great, keep this going!
Draganta the Dragonlord
2008-06-30 . chapter 5
Aw~! Flame was a louzy dragon to do that to Spyro. The poor kid. Well do continue whenever you have time. I'll be waiting for your next update. Very well done and keep up the swell work.
TMHB77
2008-06-15 . chapter 4
solid chap! spyro learns bout his dangerous surrondings and lives to fight another day! although barely! keep up the good work!
Draganta the Dragonlord
2008-06-15 . chapter 4
Phew! Close call for Spyro. And even my heart was pounding. In the end Spyro learned his lesson and escaped with his life. Do write more as I'd like to read what happens next. Keep up the seriously awesome work.
Draganta the Dragonlord
2008-06-14 . chapter 3
Aw! Spyro's getting more and more adventurous in every chapter. I loved the little talk that Spyro and Zephin had. Very well done and keep up the interesting work.
Omega 445
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
Really good i look forward to the next one ;)
TheManiacOnWheels
2008-06-14 . chapter 3
So cute! Keep going, I'm liking this alot!
Everything is just...sweet.
TMHB77
2008-06-13 . chapter 3
too cute! little spyro is great. I'll try to review the rest of your other fic soon. the only reason I'm taking forever is cuz its a long story.
Razzek Mecotl
2008-06-13 . chapter 3
Even when something dangerous is being described, this is still so freaking adorable! XD I had to stop myself from squealing like a girl with a handful of baby ratties reading the way Spyro talks. So much cuteness! And Zephin is a sweet mother. It's funny to see her being so responsible and friendly (her canon version, such as it is, is a bit flighty and rash, which is exactly how she got herself torn apart by a certain black dragon o.o). Regardless, this is a fun read so far. :)
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