plot development yay.
since i haven't read this in forever i forgot a lot of the plot, but as i read i started to remember it so i guess that worked out. umm... i can't think of anything to say. everything looks good. everything fits. if anything you could expand your vocab and use more words to sound more fluent and elegant, but its an above average story.

Awe come on, more! this is really great!

Wow this story is amazingly good!
The cliff hanger is making me feel kinda depressed but anyway please please please update soon!

*thinks in mind: Ike: um, sry pit, i cheated on you.. Pit: huh!? Why!? With whom?? ):'O Ike: this guy named yami... the only reason was because he disguised himself as you! I really didnt mean to be unfaithful! =O Pit: you.. you TRAITOR!

How do you like meh inner images of what would have happened next if this was real life? XD

if you insult readers then they WONT review -_-

god ur cruel a very cruel person! please please please update soon!

wow, all my questions from the previous chappie were answered now i want to read more still Lol

wow this reminds me og Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Askaban how he goes bak in to look at memories, but I must read more cuz i am confused about the sword and why Pit and Yami split up

When Pit pulled Yami into the empty room i thought he was going to come on to him due to the curse Lol

so is ike about to turn evil or into a demon ?? I guess Ill have to read and find out !!

wow, all I can do is read more...

0.0 Im so curious about so much, like what is Yami doing to ike and why Demons are appearing, and WHAT exactly happened to Yami, only one way 2 find out...

ok, letz brawl, give me ur fren code and ill give u mine, but dont confuse me for a noob, cuz u will be quickly hearing the pained cries of your player if u do... Lol

i like this story, im going to subscribe it to story alert, u have good writing skills, and you know how to keep it interesting, i love it !!

I think I perfer curesed Ike Lol