This was very good. The world needs more JeffxPaula! :D

Its not often you see a 'fic for this pairing. Perhaps people are too wrapped up in Ness+Paula, or consider Paula+Jeff too obvious or think he should be with Tony... whatever reason its not often whole 'fics get dedicated to it, so its nice to see people delve into it.

Its also very one-sided, so it doesn't 'mess up' anyone's portrayals for whatever reason, and it sets a nice little scene. I especially liked Jeff's reaction to looking at nature, seeing it without the snow blanket that he's so used to, after 10 years at SnowWood.

My biggest complaint is that the ending seems a bit forced. The conversational interaction between Paula and Jeff seemed like it didn't flow anything like the rest of the fic, and that's a shame.

Otherwise, nice work!

'Bout damn time this pairing got more love!

Very cute oneshot x3