So deep ... i almost drowned. Lovely fic. I loved the 2 different "possible" sides of tenten. I expecially loved the bit that said, "Tenten of the cold-gold glow, of the old blood smell and the no-family feralness;". I thought it described that side of her really well. Awesome job!

I agree with the first reviewer, you have a unique style that always pulls me in. Great work;)

Do my eyes deceive me? No reviews for this story? With such evocative style? With such flare for the simple, yet meaningful? I shout out to the heavens in such outrage!

Weirdness aside, I meant what I said. I'm glad to be the first to comment, because this was definitely unique. I love oneshots, especially those that take a snapshot of an individual or a group. Things that only happen in a span of moments can have a multitude of meanings, and you conveyed this VERY well.

A gold star for you!