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XxCharlottexX1 7/7/11 . chapter 1
Oh my god, I love how you encorperated Illi and Kiki into your story! xD Not only that, but this is a sexy, sexy story ;) I like it. :D
WereBunny87 6/4/11 . chapter 1
Bwahaha! I loved it! The poor pizza! *snerk* good job!
Rei Uta 4/21/11 . chapter 1
LOL! You are bad! And I love you for it! :D
yes.and.no.is.nes 10/10/10 . chapter 1
THIS. IS. FUCKING AWSOME :o
GazerockIsNotDead1215 2/16/10 . chapter 1
Haha lmao! I loved that whole thing! It was really funny :D The ending was great too. You tube... lol

luv,

Itachi-Senpai

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Dark Misstress of Unknown 2/13/10 . chapter 1
Must I say lovely.

I love how Naruto teased Sasuke.

Though I must admit when I read the part where Sasuke was raping the pizza I skipped it and went to the next part.

I couldn't stop laughing silently.

Its 6 in the morning right now and my family is still asleep.

I don't think they want to wake up hearing my fangirl laughs and screams(:

I love how it ended lol.

It was very good.

I know I wouldn't mind putting it on youtube either and I would sure as hell make it into a calendar! :D

Well very good job and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.
KuteKake 1/19/10 . chapter 1
Naruto sure convinced me

now all I have to do is to look for these pictures...TeeHEE
KyouyaxCloud 1/3/10 . chapter 1
NICE SEDUCE NARU!
deviline12.1 11/25/09 . chapter 1
Ahaha! OMG! I love your stories so much! I really liked the last line of this story. Lol, so funny. Another well done!
yaoihime22 9/22/09 . chapter 1
i love your end incorporating your friends in it its awesome . also the embarrassing factor for an Uchiha is uncommon but you played it well...
AnimeLash 7/6/09 . chapter 1
i luved it

Expecially the ending hehe lol
Crazykyoootie 5/28/09 . chapter 1
The ending was unique but.. how can they have coherent thoughts like putting things on YouTube? I would have dropped dead xD
Sunflowerluv13 5/1/09 . chapter 1
lol! great story! i laughed my ass off on this one! but when the yaoi came in i had my eyes glued to the screen, and the ending was priceless! haha! naruto will probably give sasuke hell after they leave! poor sasuke...
Mrs Hatake Itachi 4/11/09 . chapter 1
Wish it was real and i could see it in youtube myself!
Anihihi 1/31/09 . chapter 1
Woah! The rape was awesome! I do feel bad for the pizza, but it had it coming!:D HotHotHot Chapter!
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