Whoa, creepy...

I love it.

*silent tears fall down face* That is so sad. I'm going to keep reading now, even though it pains me so... T.T

OH MY GOSH! This is such a good story!

This story is so awesome so far! Hope to see some updates soon!

You need to update. Badly.

I've always been a fan of Alice. And I'm glad to finally see a fan fic that cuts as close to the story as this, capturing the dark feeling... yet showing the inner turmoil of Alice. Truly almost a continuation of the game... good job. I do hope that you will update it.

I just had the misfortune of looking at the date which this chapter was last posted and fear... that it'll never be updated again.

I did... however want to tell you, though I am sure you know, how clever you are. It really was like a continuation of the story and game... It's sad it shall have to rot in my mind and wait for you. **sigh** Good luck on your current endeavors, and thank you.

I usually review at the end of each reading session, but because my time at present is rather short I decided to say something now... oppose to forgetting later.

I'm very intrigued with your story... I am a huge fan of Mcgee's Alice, and have been for quite a long time **points at her name**.

This Red King... he reminds of a must more twisted goblin king in the Labyrinth. Hmn. I can't wait to see what you've come up with, but I guess I'll have to.

AHHH! This is so good! Pleeeeaaase update! I'm dying of suspense!

That was pretty cool. The red king being the one who controls what happens in the real world, and driving the other children mad to point where even the red queen wants him killed. That's a very interesting concept. Hope you update again soon.

UPDATE! FOR THE LOVE OF MIKE UPDATE. I love you story and I've been waiting for months for an update. So up date please! Ok Je Na (good-bye)

please continue this...I love this story sooooo much!

Not abandoned at all though I was distracted for FAR too long a period. I'm glad to get all this feedback and I hope to continue TAUNTING YOU ALL ALONG MY EVIL WEB! hehehe...predictions and thoughts on where you think the story goes as it moves will be lovely

wow. Oh My GOD! That is sooooo good. Keep writing!

Wow. I've never treally known there was a red king.. Please write more!